I really enjoy this story. I’ve read up to chapter 170 on a different site and it is really well written. I know you don’t think that the first bits are, but I have seen way worse things written online. Now it is outstanding.
Thank you for the kind words! With time and suggestions from other authors, I have become a much better writer This has been a lot of fun, especially working in ideas from readers and even creating characters for them.
If you remember Sarah from the gang's visit to the mountain resort, she and her girlfriend will be appearing in several chapters starting at 177. As when we met Sarah in my story, JotaBSP is my co-author for these chapters. They were a lot of work, but a lot of fun, especially seeing my characters in scenes that I didn't write; they really came to life.