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Offline Sparky

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The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« on: 22. January 2022, 20:27:02 PM »
Runesdale is a quaint town in middle England. Located near a large forest, it has a Supermarket, a Butchers, a Bakery, 7 Gents Barbers, 16 Ladies Hairdressers, plus a Doctor's Surgery, a Dentist, and an Orthodontist.

Victoria woke up at her normal time this morning, and went into the bathroom, to get herself ready for school. In the bathroom, she looked in the mirror, opened her mouth... and SCREAMED! Her scream was so loud that people who lived two streets away could hear it.


SHE HAD BRACES!

The strange thing is that, when Victoria went to bed last night, she didn't actually HAVE any braces!


COMING SOON:

to a Braces Forum Near you...

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Offline tdella

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #1 on: 22. January 2022, 23:57:17 PM »
Fun.  Wonder what are the prompts that would cause such a discovery - or, discoveries!

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #2 on: 23. January 2022, 03:14:45 AM »
Wow, quite the thtawt. Thowth lotth of potential. I like it!

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #3 on: 24. January 2022, 16:59:43 PM »
This should be good!

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #4 on: 24. January 2022, 17:36:19 PM »
Looks promising  I wonder what else Vicky will get as time and treatment progresses or if she upsets the dark fairy

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #5 on: 25. January 2022, 01:42:47 AM »
So "timeandbrace" came up with the initial 5-line story concept for this, then I came up with the story outline. "timeandbrace" is not only helping me with ideas, he's gonna be writing some parts of the story (primarily the bits describing what braces certain people will have).

I'm not sure whether the story will be sufficiently "separated" such that he will be able to post specific chapters under his name, or whether the bits he does will be incorporated into the main storyline. Maybe a bit of both.... we'll see what happens.

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #6 on: 25. January 2022, 15:21:14 PM »
Another interesting concept. I'm looking forward to it.

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #7 on: 25. January 2022, 16:42:58 PM »
"Hey, Magic, come take a look at this...." says Sparkle
"What you found now?" asks Magic
"It seems some poor human went to bed with normal teeth, and woke up with braces. I mean that has GOT to be someone having a prank!".


------ cut -----

"Hi mum" said Lilly
"Lilly! Nice to see you, you haven't been home for AGES..."
"Sorry, I've been a bit busy"
"Busy? But you're a second year university student, you're never busy..."
"Erm, I'm not actually at university any more..."
"What??!! You DROPPED OUT OF UNIVERSITY?" shouted an angry mum.


------ cut -----

"The Queen has requested your presence"
"So when do I need to go visit her?" asks Lilly
"As soon as you can make it, I suggest. She asked for you by name!"


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Magic, Sparkle and Lilly are standing at the end of a narrow road, in front of a small brick building. A small stream flows out of the small building, and down into a gully.

They walk inside, and find that they are inside a well house for a large spring. On a shelf they see a set of keys and an old lamp, as well as a bottle of water and some food.

They followed the tiny stream down a gentle slope, where they found the stream disappearing into an old metal grating in the ground.


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"So who are you? I mean, the only person I know that can give us fairies braces is Santa"
"My name is Sebille.... I'm a tooth fairy"


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Lilly slapped her hard across her face. "Just shut up will you!!! And SIT DOWN!" she shouted, pushing the princess back onto the floor.

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COMING SOON to a Braces Forum near you...




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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #8 on: 29. January 2022, 08:10:33 AM »
Very cool and unique story!

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #9 on: 29. January 2022, 09:07:49 AM »
Excited to read more! Definitely feels like a trailer with the small snippets of scenes.

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #10 on: 31. January 2022, 02:02:28 AM »
Runesdale is a quaint town in middle England. Located near a large forest, it has a Supermarket, a Butchers, a Bakery, 26 Coffee Shops, plus a Doctor's Surgery, a Dentist, and an Orthodontist.

Caroline woke up at her normal time this morning, and went into the bathroom, to get herself ready for work. In the bathroom, she looked in the mirror, opened her mouth... and SCREAMED! Her scream was so loud that people who lived half a mile away could hear it.


SHE HAD CROOKED TEETH, BRACES, AND HEADGEAR!

The strange thing is that, when Caroline went to bed last night, her teeth were quite straight, and she didn't actually HAVE any braces!!


COMING SOON:

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The Dark Fairy
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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #11 on: 01. February 2022, 23:10:08 PM »
Runesdale is a quaint town in middle England. Located near a large forest, it has a Supermarket, a Butchers, a Bakery, 3 Olympic Sized Swimming Pools (one outdoors), plus a Doctor's Surgery, a Dentist, and an Orthodontist.

When Julie woke up this morning, her mouth was feeling sore. She went into the bathroom, mainly to get herself ready for work, but also to have a look in the mirror to see why her mouth was sore. As she looked in the mirror, with her mouth wide open, she could see 2 large cavities in her lower left molars, where she felt sore.

The strange thing is that, when Julie went to bed last night, her teeth didn't actually HAVE any cavities!!


COMING SOON:

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The Dark Fairy
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Offline firesonga

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #12 on: 02. February 2022, 02:39:52 AM »
Your trailers are killing me, I can't wait for the actual.

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #13 on: 02. February 2022, 11:55:46 AM »
Your trailers are killing me, I can't wait for the actual.

Glad you like them.... I'm considering them as fiction in their own right. I should add that,  like a movie trailer, just because you see something in the trailer doesn't mean it makes it into the actual story....

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #14 on: 02. February 2022, 17:21:08 PM »
All promising starts I like the one with Caroline waking up with headgear but all the starts you've posted so far are good  so come on don't keep us in suspense too much longer for the full thing

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #15 on: 02. February 2022, 19:40:45 PM »
"Ok, any ideas what it could be?"
"Well, it could be a few things. Santa's gone rogue and come south a bit early? One of the elves has been trying out some magic? Or one of our younger fairies is playing with magic they shouldn't be?"


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"So, how can I be of help, your majesty?"
"Well, it's more that I think I might be of help to you. I've been reading about the strange happenings at Runesdale" said the Queen.


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"I need you to tell me more about the Dark Archive"
"The Dark Archive? What's that?"


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"So, number 4: 'you may not say anying about the contents of the Dark Archive, or indeed that the Dark Archive even exists, without specific permission from someone with a security grade 90 or above'. Hey, if I don't actually sign this, I already know about the 'Dark Archive'... that's stupid!"
"Yeah, I know it is - but that's stupid official paperwork for you!"


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"The FAS guys are completely trustworthy, but have a rather limited skillset, much of which involves just aiming then pulling a trigger. And the guys I work with just don't have your knowledge. You guys understand humans, and teeth and braces, and that's what this is all about."

------ cut -----

On the wall there was a sign: 'YOU ARE IN A MAZE OF TWISTY LITTLE PASSAGES, ALL DIFFERENT.'

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"What on EARTH are those things on your feet? I mean, the pink looks quite cute, but what ARE they?"
"Oh, they're my roller boots! Don't you think they are cool?"


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COMING SOON to a Braces Forum near you...


Offline Sparky

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #16 on: 02. February 2022, 19:57:06 PM »
All promising starts I like the one with Caroline waking up with headgear but all the starts you've posted so far are good  so come on don't keep us in suspense too much longer for the full thing

I guess only ONE can be the start..... but they all happen in the story (or just before the story).

I seem to have one more trailer to post (maybe I should write some more!). The story is a bit of a joint effort between me & "Core", he's been working out what braces our various (yes, there will be several of them!) victims will have, and will be writing the chapters that describe in detail what braces the victims get. I'm writing all the fairies stuff (and there's plenty of that) - missing from this series is Emily & Wendy (they wanted too much money... they have got a bit to big for their fairy boots!) but we introduce several new characters, and find out what Lilly has been up to. As is normal with my stories, it's less a braces story, but a story with braces in (and hopefully along the way, a few bits of fun that will make you smile!).

And the roller boots thing? Ask Core....

So, the question is: is it that these story trailers are REALLY that interesting, or is it that, with there being so little ELSE happening here, ANYTHING that gets posted is interesting?


> go right
YOU ARE IN A MAZE OF TWISTY LITTLE PASSAGES, ALL DIFFERENT.

> go left
YOU ARE IN A LITTLE MAZE OF TWISTING PASSAGES, ALL DIFFERENT.

> go straight
YOU ARE IN A LITTLE TWISTY MAZE OF PASSAGES, ALL DIFFERENT.
A BIG DRAGON BLOCKS YOUR WAY.

> kill dragon
WITH WHAT?  YOUR BARE HANDS? 

> yes
CONGRATULATIONS!  YOU HAVE JUST VANQUISHED A DRAGON WITH YOUR BARE HANDS!  (UNBELIEVABLE, ISN'T IT?)



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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #17 on: 02. February 2022, 20:55:20 PM »
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So, the question is: is it that these story trailers are REALLY that interesting, or is it that, with there being so little ELSE happening here, ANYTHING that gets posted is interesting?

The stories aren't really my cup of tea, as you know, but you write quite well and are certainly more imaginative/outside the box than me with my hidebound tales. ;D

Though you're right, there's very little else happening here besides the video links. Most people only want to consume content rather than exert even the slightest effort to create it. So keep up the good work!

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #18 on: 03. February 2022, 00:36:29 AM »
I have an advance copy of the working file. I can definitely say that it will be worth reading once it is posted. Too bad there aren't more people willing to contribute stories to the forum.

I need to take my own advice and work on my stories a bit more. I've been a bit lazy and haven't put that much effort into them lately.

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #19 on: 03. February 2022, 01:24:58 AM »
I have an advance copy of the working file. I can definitely say that it will be worth reading once it is posted. Too bad there aren't more people willing to contribute stories to the forum.

I need to take my own advice and work on my stories a bit more. I've been a bit lazy and haven't put that much effort into them lately.

When I finished Plain Jane, I wasn't sure what would be next... "Dave, Andrea & them" needed to be finished, then some one suggested "a dark fairy", which got my thinking juices going. There's so much you can do when there's badness around! Doubly so when that fairy is a tooth fairy that seems to have 'turned to the dark side'!  And gets the idea of giving people braces - that the ortho can't remove!

For a change, I actually STARTED writing the story with the later chapters, so I knew where the story was heading (besides, that's where 'character X' and 'character Y' have a fight, so was fun to write). When I look at the text file, the "end bit" is currently the second 50%, with 2 big gaps in the first 50% yet to be written!


YES, Braceface2015, you do need to get doing some more writing, as do a load of others in here! There's some good stories needing to be continued!


The forums seem to have generally been quiet this last month, not really sure why... any ideas?



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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #20 on: 05. February 2022, 00:46:29 AM »
Runesdale is a quaint town in middle England. Located near a large forest, it has a Supermarket, a Butchers, a Bakery, 4 Roller-Skating Rinks (one outdoors), plus a Doctor's Surgery, a Dentist, and an Orthodontist.

When Carrie woke up late this morning, her mouth was feeling sore. She went into the bathroom, to get herself a glass of water... she was still quite tired after "working online as Daisy" last night. That was when she looked in the mirror, and discovered that she seems to have a lot of metal in her mouth, full bands to be precise. Not to mention the double headgear, and she could feel something lumpy inside her mouth too.

Carrie smiled. She absolutely loved what she saw! But where had they come from? Who really cared, they were ten times better than the fake braces she had!!!!

(It goes without saying that, when Carrie went to bed last night, her teeth were actually perfectly straight, and had no braces on them!)


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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #21 on: 05. February 2022, 08:13:18 AM »
Very nice start, Sparky, thank you.