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Offline Sparky

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The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« on: 22. January 2022, 20:27:02 PM »
Runesdale is a quaint town in middle England. Located near a large forest, it has a Supermarket, a Butchers, a Bakery, 7 Gents Barbers, 16 Ladies Hairdressers, plus a Doctor's Surgery, a Dentist, and an Orthodontist.

Victoria woke up at her normal time this morning, and went into the bathroom, to get herself ready for school. In the bathroom, she looked in the mirror, opened her mouth... and SCREAMED! Her scream was so loud that people who lived two streets away could hear it.


SHE HAD BRACES!

The strange thing is that, when Victoria went to bed last night, she didn't actually HAVE any braces!


COMING SOON:

to a Braces Forum Near you...

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The Dark Fairy
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Offline tdella

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #1 on: 22. January 2022, 23:57:17 PM »
Fun.  Wonder what are the prompts that would cause such a discovery - or, discoveries!

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #2 on: 23. January 2022, 03:14:45 AM »
Wow, quite the thtawt. Thowth lotth of potential. I like it!

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #3 on: 24. January 2022, 16:59:43 PM »
This should be good!

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #4 on: 24. January 2022, 17:36:19 PM »
Looks promising  I wonder what else Vicky will get as time and treatment progresses or if she upsets the dark fairy

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #5 on: 25. January 2022, 01:42:47 AM »
So "timeandbrace" came up with the initial 5-line story concept for this, then I came up with the story outline. "timeandbrace" is not only helping me with ideas, he's gonna be writing some parts of the story (primarily the bits describing what braces certain people will have).

I'm not sure whether the story will be sufficiently "separated" such that he will be able to post specific chapters under his name, or whether the bits he does will be incorporated into the main storyline. Maybe a bit of both.... we'll see what happens.

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #6 on: 25. January 2022, 15:21:14 PM »
Another interesting concept. I'm looking forward to it.

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #7 on: 25. January 2022, 16:42:58 PM »
"Hey, Magic, come take a look at this...." says Sparkle
"What you found now?" asks Magic
"It seems some poor human went to bed with normal teeth, and woke up with braces. I mean that has GOT to be someone having a prank!".


------ cut -----

"Hi mum" said Lilly
"Lilly! Nice to see you, you haven't been home for AGES..."
"Sorry, I've been a bit busy"
"Busy? But you're a second year university student, you're never busy..."
"Erm, I'm not actually at university any more..."
"What??!! You DROPPED OUT OF UNIVERSITY?" shouted an angry mum.


------ cut -----

"The Queen has requested your presence"
"So when do I need to go visit her?" asks Lilly
"As soon as you can make it, I suggest. She asked for you by name!"


------ cut -----

Magic, Sparkle and Lilly are standing at the end of a narrow road, in front of a small brick building. A small stream flows out of the small building, and down into a gully.

They walk inside, and find that they are inside a well house for a large spring. On a shelf they see a set of keys and an old lamp, as well as a bottle of water and some food.

They followed the tiny stream down a gentle slope, where they found the stream disappearing into an old metal grating in the ground.


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"So who are you? I mean, the only person I know that can give us fairies braces is Santa"
"My name is Sebille.... I'm a tooth fairy"


------ cut -----

Lilly slapped her hard across her face. "Just shut up will you!!! And SIT DOWN!" she shouted, pushing the princess back onto the floor.

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COMING SOON to a Braces Forum near you...




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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #8 on: 29. January 2022, 08:10:33 AM »
Very cool and unique story!

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #9 on: 29. January 2022, 09:07:49 AM »
Excited to read more! Definitely feels like a trailer with the small snippets of scenes.

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #10 on: 31. January 2022, 02:02:28 AM »
Runesdale is a quaint town in middle England. Located near a large forest, it has a Supermarket, a Butchers, a Bakery, 26 Coffee Shops, plus a Doctor's Surgery, a Dentist, and an Orthodontist.

Caroline woke up at her normal time this morning, and went into the bathroom, to get herself ready for work. In the bathroom, she looked in the mirror, opened her mouth... and SCREAMED! Her scream was so loud that people who lived half a mile away could hear it.


SHE HAD CROOKED TEETH, BRACES, AND HEADGEAR!

The strange thing is that, when Caroline went to bed last night, her teeth were quite straight, and she didn't actually HAVE any braces!!


COMING SOON:

to a Braces Forum near you...

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The Dark Fairy
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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #11 on: 01. February 2022, 23:10:08 PM »
Runesdale is a quaint town in middle England. Located near a large forest, it has a Supermarket, a Butchers, a Bakery, 3 Olympic Sized Swimming Pools (one outdoors), plus a Doctor's Surgery, a Dentist, and an Orthodontist.

When Julie woke up this morning, her mouth was feeling sore. She went into the bathroom, mainly to get herself ready for work, but also to have a look in the mirror to see why her mouth was sore. As she looked in the mirror, with her mouth wide open, she could see 2 large cavities in her lower left molars, where she felt sore.

The strange thing is that, when Julie went to bed last night, her teeth didn't actually HAVE any cavities!!


COMING SOON:

to a Braces Forum near you...

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The Dark Fairy
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Offline firesonga

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #12 on: 02. February 2022, 02:39:52 AM »
Your trailers are killing me, I can't wait for the actual.

Offline Sparky

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #13 on: 02. February 2022, 11:55:46 AM »
Your trailers are killing me, I can't wait for the actual.

Glad you like them.... I'm considering them as fiction in their own right. I should add that,  like a movie trailer, just because you see something in the trailer doesn't mean it makes it into the actual story....

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Re: The Dark Fairy - A Trailer
« Reply #14 on: 02. February 2022, 17:21:08 PM »
All promising starts I like the one with Caroline waking up with headgear but all the starts you've posted so far are good  so come on don't keep us in suspense too much longer for the full thing