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Offline bracesfanza

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Re: STORY: Short-term pain for long-term gain
« Reply #45 on: 31. December 2018, 04:28:53 AM »
Cool story. Am enjoying it very much. Cannot wait for more.

Offline Misluposu

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Re: STORY: Short-term pain for long-term gain
« Reply #46 on: 02. January 2019, 21:24:22 PM »
Lovely story, thanks for posting!

Offline Hops

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« Reply #47 on: 27. March 2019, 11:22:56 AM »
Great story!

Offline dominek000

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« Reply #48 on: 20. August 2019, 02:23:08 AM »
Really greate story!

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« Reply #49 on: 05. November 2019, 05:01:55 AM »
I love the story, it is really realistic and could heppen.

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Re: STORY: Short-term pain for long-term gain
« Reply #50 on: 08. December 2019, 20:41:13 PM »
What a great story, thanks for sharing!

I love how they are first in it together, and it turns into a feeling of betrayal. The way it's written (diary/journal style) is also a great angle and helps understand what the protagonist is thinking and feeling.