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Offline bracesfanza

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Re: STORY: Short-term pain for long-term gain
« Reply #45 on: 31. December 2018, 04:28:53 AM »
Cool story. Am enjoying it very much. Cannot wait for more.

Offline Misluposu

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Re: STORY: Short-term pain for long-term gain
« Reply #46 on: 02. January 2019, 21:24:22 PM »
Lovely story, thanks for posting!

Offline Hops

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« Reply #47 on: 27. March 2019, 11:22:56 AM »
Great story!

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Re: STORY: Short-term pain for long-term gain
« Reply #48 on: 20. August 2019, 02:23:08 AM »
Really greate story!

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« Reply #49 on: 05. November 2019, 05:01:55 AM »
I love the story, it is really realistic and could heppen.

Offline Headgear-compliance

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Re: STORY: Short-term pain for long-term gain
« Reply #50 on: 08. December 2019, 20:41:13 PM »
What a great story, thanks for sharing!

I love how they are first in it together, and it turns into a feeling of betrayal. The way it's written (diary/journal style) is also a great angle and helps understand what the protagonist is thinking and feeling.

Offline Jock1

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Re: STORY: Short-term pain for long-term gain
« Reply #51 on: 14. June 2020, 10:45:36 AM »
Great story!!

Offline elio23145

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« Reply #52 on: 13. July 2020, 19:26:10 PM »
what a great story!

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Re: STORY: Short-term pain for long-term gain
« Reply #53 on: 15. November 2020, 19:55:41 PM »
Probably not alone in here in hoping that this story gets continued.  Maybe a little "writer's block" or a loss of inspiration?  Anyway, hope that this will serve as a little encouragement.  It would be a shame to let this one go unfinished.

Offline cbraces522

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« Reply #54 on: 18. November 2020, 08:25:36 AM »
This is one of my favorites especially because it seems like it could really happen.

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Re: STORY: Short-term pain for long-term gain
« Reply #55 on: 19. November 2020, 02:40:33 AM »
I agree with everyone else who had said they would love more of this.
It’s a great story and an interesting idea. Would love to see how it all plays out

Offline MagnetMouth

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Re: STORY: Short-term pain for long-term gain
« Reply #56 on: 22. November 2020, 16:17:53 PM »
Great story! Please dont stop