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Offline Tin_Grin8444

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth
« Reply #30 on: 24. May 2020, 08:35:48 AM »
Howdy howdy friends! I'm very happy with the story presently, and I definitely had a blast writing it. Would y'all want me to continue with other chapters added to this story, or should I start on a new story? Maybe both!  ;D I'd love to hear some thoughts!

Much love ! <3

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth
« Reply #31 on: 24. May 2020, 10:42:31 AM »
My suggestion would be to keep adding to this story. You could do several side stories that explore some of the other characters, just do it as a book 2, book 3, etc. If you did it that way, you could label it as "Managing A Metal Mouth, Book2: Cynthia's story", and add other stories as you write them. It would keep all the related stories together and still allow you to explore the different characters without having them all joined together in one story.

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth
« Reply #32 on: 24. May 2020, 11:02:00 AM »
My suggestion would be to keep adding to this story. You could do several side stories that explore some of the other characters, just do it as a book 2, book 3, etc. If you did it that way, you could label it as "Managing A Metal Mouth, Book2: Cynthia's story", and add other stories as you write them. It would keep all the related stories together and still allow you to explore the different characters without having them all joined together in one story.

Lol guessing you read my post to "Stories"
Thanks so much for the recommendation! I've already looked into some methods of formatting separate continuations of this story. I'm super excited to expand on Cynthia's character!  ;D
 Any other specific characters you'd like to see get some attention?

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth [Book 1]
« Reply #33 on: 24. May 2020, 11:43:49 AM »
at the Moment we only know Cynthia a bit.. Definitely want to read more about her "background"

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth [Book 1]
« Reply #34 on: 24. May 2020, 17:37:28 PM »
Any character that you feel like writing about will be appreciated.

Her aunt sounds interesting. Maybe a story about what her job is like or how she became an orthodontist. There are so many possible opportunities with her.

I don't tell other writers what to write. I feel that the story should come from the mind of the writer. When I write, I like to write a story that appeals to me. If other people enjoy what I have written, I find it to be a good thing. Not everything that I write can be posted here, so I do use other sites to post to.

Comments are always welcome and appreciated, especially when I hear that someone has enjoyed something that I have written.

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth [Book 1]
« Reply #35 on: 24. May 2020, 18:26:09 PM »
I like your writing style very much. Like other have said, I would like to know a bit about Cynthia and her orthodontic story.

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth [Book 1]
« Reply #36 on: 25. May 2020, 07:06:12 AM »
I'm enjoying the story, and would love to see more chapters!

Thanks for writing it!

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth [Book 1]
« Reply #37 on: 26. May 2020, 03:00:04 AM »
Thank you so much for the story.  I also would love to see more character development for Cynthia.

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth [Book 1]
« Reply #38 on: 26. May 2020, 22:35:08 PM »
Indeed, very nice and well written. Applause.
Curious to see more.
Thanks

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth [Book 1]
« Reply #39 on: 28. May 2020, 06:58:24 AM »
This story sounds a lot like MissFallout2077 from deviantart haha

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth [Book 1]
« Reply #40 on: 16. June 2020, 00:42:05 AM »
Brilliant story, really enjoyable

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth [Book 1]
« Reply #41 on: 21. June 2020, 19:49:39 PM »
Continue please

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth [Book 1]
« Reply #42 on: 26. June 2020, 04:29:40 AM »
One of my favorite stories that I have read in a long time, keep it up

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Re: Story: Managing a Metal Mouth [Book 1]
« Reply #43 on: 17. July 2020, 11:56:37 AM »
great story! please continue