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« Reply #15 on: 23. April 2020, 20:44:54 PM »
What a terrible stepmother.  Can’t wait to hear what the present day ortho says.

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Re: Story - Never Been Kissed
« Reply #16 on: 24. April 2020, 16:36:01 PM »
Very nice continue. cant wait for the next chapter! :)

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« Reply #17 on: 25. April 2020, 23:24:51 PM »
Chapter 8

Jenny

I started to question why I went so many times to the orthodontist who I only saw when I was changing braces, the other times it was just cleaning with his assistants. My stepmother got extremely angry and concluded that keeping my mouth shut was the best policy. That year, instead of fixed braces that was what I thought I would have and finally be like some girls at school, as she knew it was my least favorite brace, on her birthday in addition to the “Gonzalez Activator”, I started wearing a vertical pull headgear, that consisted in a big neon yellow strap around and on top of my head with two white square pads near the outer endings of my brows from where a strip with holes came vertically down my face like a frame and a big red chin cup from were two wires came to connect to the strip with holes. That’s how she kept my mouth shut for another year. All the braces were in very bright colors. Colors that didn’t talk with themselves and it didn’t matter what I dressed because all anyone who looked at me could see were the braces.
You might be wondering why I never told anything to my father, but the truth is that the witch was constantly crying saying that I didn’t love her and didn’t see that all she wanted was my well-being. This and because I was afraid of her and I needed her if I wanted to eat my meals or drink water. One of my father's friends asked him when were my braces coming out because I was already wearing them when he met me when I was a child and it was sad to see me wearing all that and it made the witch stop playing with my life. All these unnecessary braces damaged my bite so it was time to fix it. Well, that’s what I thought.
The fixed braces were a mix of brackets and metal bands on my molars and my cuspids. At this time I was 13. To go with the fixed braces a protraction facemask, that also had a red chin cup from where two metal wires separated by around 10cm came up and had a bar with hooks in front of my mouth where I was supposed to attach two elastics. Besides the two elastics, two thin wires connected the facemask to my cuspids that were covered by metal bands with these thin wires bonding the facemask to my teeth so that I couldn’t take it out. The metal frame went up somewhat contouring my nose where the metal bars started getting closer until being 2cm away from each other. It all was held by a red strap around my head. To shower I had to remove this strap and disengage the chin cup leaving all the metal hanging in front of my face, it was fairly easy to eat but cleaning used to take me about 30 minutes after each meal, drinking was only possible with a straw and I continued being the city joke and I didn’t even try to tell things to my father because he wouldn’t believe me and at this point, I had quit thinking he would care. I was almost 15 and have been wearing the facemask for two years, I was ignored at school and was never invited to anything.
My stepmother convinced my father to let me go to Disney for my birthday and one month before the trip I had the facemask replaced by double headgear and j-hooks in a high pull headgear. I had 6 big wires coming out of my mouth that didn’t come out, so I had to eat with them, brush with them, sleep with them... I didn’t enjoy my trip because of the braces, I didn’t feel any pain but with all that metal being wired in I couldn’t ride many attractions and the other people in my group didn’t want to talk to me so I spent the whole time with the tour guide. All the headgear I wore didn’t have safety locks anymore, but it didn’t matter because, of course, everything was wired in.

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Re: Story - Never Been Kissed
« Reply #18 on: 25. April 2020, 23:30:18 PM »
Chapter 9

Jenny

When I came back, I found out that one of the assistants of the orthodontist my stepmother used to take me found my father and told him what I’ve been through. She said that he didn’t even keep records of all the braces I wore along more than seven years. They were having an affair for all these years. My father kicked the witch out of our house, sued the orthodontist, and took me to another orthodontist who said I had extensive damage, but he could fix it.
The j-hooks were discontinued, he replaced the brackets and replaced the archwires. For the two years, I was wearing fixed braces with Dr. Gonzalez he had never changed nor tightened the archwires which means the braces were useless but luckily he didn’t apply pressure with the headgear or else the damage would be impossible to correct, the facemask kind of solved some damages caused by the “activator” I had to wear.
I was supposed to wear double headgear for 14 hours a day and elastics. To really fix everything he wanted a slow treatment but I wanted it to be as fast as it could and my father agreed so I started my self-imposed torture asking to wire the face bow (which he didn’t) and start with as many elastics as I should wear for the treatment to be fast. That’s how I ended up with 12 elastics, headgear all the time, and even if my father asked I refused to take off. My ortho said that if I wanted he could tighten the braces every week to be faster so every Monday morning I was there.
With my compliance and willpower, it took only three years to fix my teeth. The fixed braces were off the day before I went to college.
I was supposed to start on Monday but my ortho was traveling so I didn’t know if I could stop wearing the braces. He came back on Thursday and told me that I could go to college without the fixed braces as long as I wore the retainers all the time. The last thing I wanted was my teeth to shift, so I wore the retainers except for college and when I was with the boys. The retainers were kept in the car during classes but in my mouth whenever I was alone. The university is only two hours away from my father's house and I chose this one because it’s not very far but is not the city I grew up and I wanted a fresh start. I had my apartment and my life would finally be great. Okay, it would be good if I put down some weight but amazingly I was happy with myself.

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Re: Story - Never Been Kissed
« Reply #19 on: 26. April 2020, 11:25:49 AM »
Great story

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« Reply #20 on: 26. April 2020, 22:36:14 PM »
Chapter 10

Jenny

I was lost; I’d better ask for information or else I wouldn’t find my classroom. While I was looking for any person who could help me, someone hit on my shoulder and I let my books fall. Just like in a cheesy movie a guy went down on his knees to help me with my books while I did the same. Despite life imitates art, unlike in a romantic cheesy movie, when I hit my forehead on a boy’s mouth, I saw blood so, a horror movie for sure. I put my hand on my forehead but nothing had happened, it's not my blood, it was very fast, then I saw the guy running being held by another guy. I got my books, cleaned them with wipe removers I had in my bag, asked help to find my classroom, and waited for the professor to arrive.
Two boys enter the classroom. One is tall and muscular and very handsome. The other is also tall, but is skinny, has lots of acne and has the lips so swollen that he can’t close his mouth. I apologized many times; he must have been feeling a lot of pain and I blame myself for being so clumsy. And how would I know he wore braces?  I can see a huge amount of metal inside and from that moment I wanted to protect this guy because I was sure someone was making him wear those outdated braces. On Monday he comes to the class and more metal is shown because he’s wearing a lip bumper and I’m sure it’s my fault so I apologize again and from now on I’m going to give him all protection I can. If it depended on me, he will never feel lonely. And it wouldn’t be a difficult task because even with those old looking braces being shown all the time and a little acne on his forehead, he was good to look at.
They used to hang out with the popular crowd, but I heard them talking about him. The girls said his most attractive feature is the bank account but not even money would make them touch his mouth. The boys were not so nice. I heard them saying that Frank drinking a Bloody Mary is the alcoholic version of canned tomato soup, Nate didn’t need a can opener because Frank was always by his side while another douchebag replied that Frank is so stupid that put on a chastity belt in the wrong place but surprisingly reached the goal. They were nice to Frank in front of Nate which means he didn’t know about the bullying. One day Frank came wearing a high pull headgear, he was next to Nate, who wasn’t looking at him, suddenly one of the as**oles pulled Frank by the straps of his headgear. I couldn't believe my eyes. I couldn't believe that piece of shit had done what he did. Frank came and sit next to me and started massaging his cheek above his molars.
His beautiful gray eyes are sad, he is red so I guess he is ashamed because of the loud whistles he made when he said “that’s” and “was”, so I change the subject. I didn’t know what to say so I started talking about the classes and our professor arrived. Later that day I called Nate and told him what I knew his friends said and did to Frank. Nate fought with each one of them and since then we started being inseparable. The brainless hot guy, the tin man, and the chubby short girl.
What I didn’t know is that the cheesy movie scene Frank and I role-played on the day we met would be based on a true story because that’s how I met the love of my life. The more time we spent together the more I liked Frank, I love his sarcasm, his geniality, how fast his brain works, and how he treats everyone. When someone isn’t nice to him, he responds with kindness which breaks the person. It’s difficult to keep up with him because the boy is fast. I love it when he gets all red when whistles or when he makes one of his extremely intelligent jokes that nobody understands but I do.

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« Reply #21 on: 26. April 2020, 22:43:37 PM »
Chapter 11

Jenny

More than a year later, Frank had his lip bumper removed and suddenly, I feel shocked because I can’t be near him, his lips look bigger and extremely kissable. I’ve never been kissed so I don’t know what to do and I want my first kiss to be with him. But he is extremely shy and one day we were watching a movie and Nate went out to buy popcorn and I was laying on Frank’s leg and he started playing with my hair, I looked at him and he was looking away, daydreaming and smiling a very metallic smile. I wish he was thinking about me but I knew he wasn’t but I wanted him to notice me, I needed to kiss him so I did a very mature thing: I stood up and ran away.
I couldn’t wait for the elevator but going down the stairs I saw Nate with a guy, kissing. He looked at me shocked and said goodbye to the guy I’ve never seen before.

“Please don’t tell anyone.”

“I won’t. But let’s exchange one secret to another. I know yours so you can’t tell anyone mine.”

“Done. What’s yours?”

“I almost kissed Frank.”

“YOU WHAT??? Wait, with the headgear and metal bands and all, like now???”

I shook my head yes. “I don’t care about his braces. But say, what do you think about that?”

“Well, I guess you have terrible timing. He is shy and with those braces, he won’t believe you like him.”

“I know, I know... I know exactly how he feels. So, you don’t think I should talk to him.”

“Are you sure you are asking ME to give YOU advice? You know that if it weren’t for Frank I would have failed every class we’ve taken. Okay but if it is terrible advice don’t blame me. My advice is: can’t you wait until the braces come out? Or at least the headgear...”

“I guess that’s what I’ll do... Thank you.”

“Can’t you pay me for this advice and secret keeper service lending me your apartment?”

Great, Jenny, now Nate, the lazy has you in his big hands.

“I’ll make a copy of the keys”

It’s been almost two years since it happened and I’m still in love with Frank. I’ve almost kissed him a couple of times because I can’t resist. I’m so shocked by my behavior that I feel better when Nate is with us. I know that if I kiss him with the headgear and all I might jeopardize any future relationship or even our friendship because I know how he feels towards his braces and because I’ve never been kissed in my life, I won’t know what to do. Nate thinks he lives in my apartment and now that he has a boyfriend, they spend most of the time there. Sometimes I stay with Frank and sometimes I lock myself in my bedroom.
When Frank told me that it was his call to get those old school braces I thought he was crazy, well, being the genius he is it shouldn’t surprise me his need to help science but now I’m a little confused about that.
In all these years his braces changed a little, with springs, hooks, elastics, and the high pull became a combination and then was replaced by an Interlandi with many elastics and that's what made me see the red flag.
Because of my extensive knowledge of unnecessary braces, I can see in Frank’s braces that any force is being applied, the elastics aren’t pulling anything, they’re just… there. Recently he told me that his father got into a fight with his orthodontist because he refused to give him more modern paraphernalia and threatened to sue his father. When Frank told me this story I wanted to know who his orthodontist was because something is wrong. I can feel it.

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« Reply #22 on: 26. April 2020, 23:06:28 PM »
Chapter 12

Jenny

Today he will have his braces tightened and I’m going with Frank because I want to know who his orthodontist is, but the man refused to have anyone else in the room so I couldn’t see him. His assistant said the waiting room was for patients only and I had to wait in the car. While I wait I start looking for a pen to do a crossword and find my retainers that I don’t remember when I stopped wearing in the glove compartment, it was all misshaped. After about twenty minutes I see Frank walking to the car and he has his head down but when I see him, he is very red and about to cry but I know he won’t. He is ashamed because I am the first person to see him like this.
Frank is paying the price for the disagreement between his father and the orthodontist. Now, in addition to the Interlandi, he wears j-hooks and another headgear on hos lower jaw. Just like I did except for the j-hooks, his headgear has very big leather straps that cover his cheeks, mine were regular ones, not leather. His head is full of straps, but I don’t think any force is being applied. I just hug him but he stands still and out of the blue repels me. I want to go to his place, show him that he can count on me but he drops me off in front of my building and leaves.
I’m sad for him. His light is almost completely off, he is having trouble sleeping, can only eat soft foods, his lips don’t touch anymore so his mouth is extremely dry always showing those dark bands and I apply a moisturizer whenever I can or make him apply by himself. He doesn’t look me in the eyes and doesn’t want me to spend time with him, but I force myself to be always by his side, to take care of him. He is already working with his father and his uncle but he simply stopped talking and I know it’s because when he speaks all those wires collide with each other making noises so he talking as fast as he talks, makes the same noises I hated to make. His co-workers pretend he doesn’t exist. The only one he still talks to is Nate and just if it’s extremely necessary.  I’m always by his side but he doesn’t want to talk to me, but I understand how he feels like, I guess he doesn’t want to be seen like this and he only sees me as a friend but on the top of that, I’m a girl.

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« Reply #23 on: 26. April 2020, 23:08:57 PM »
Chapter 13

Jenny

I’m going to investigate this orthodontist. I went there but he was wearing mask, glasses, and cap and I was in the car so I can’t say that I know who he is and I keep trying to discover who this man is but in six months I didn’t discover anything until a lucky day at the supermarket when I saw my father’s ex-wife. She didn’t see me, so I followed her and discovered where she lives. I wanted to tell Nate, but I want to be certain before telling him. In the morning, I skipped classes because I’ve already finished everything and discovered that Dr. Rogers and Dr. Gonzalez are the same.
I waited and confronted ‘Dr. Rogers’ when he was leaving his office that day. I spent the whole day in the car, I was tired and hungry but I couldn’t miss him. He told me that when my father sued him, he needed money and one way to get it was to pretend the study that Frank agreed on participating existed. So, he started the treatment that was already three years longer than a real treatment would take but different from me, he did everything right but with old material and not applying much force.
Five months ago, he needed more money to pay for my father so he installed the lower headgear that Frank never should have worn and charged good money for the new headgear and the j-hooks. And three months ago he added the elastics to connect to the face bow because Frank is too clever and he needed to change his focus from what he thought was wrong. Unlike in my case, he had everything documented so he said he couldn’t simply quit everything.
I threatened him again and was calling the police when he said he would discontinue the j-hooks and headgears and change the bands to regular brackets a few months after that. It wasn’t what I wanted him to do, I wanted him to free Frank from all those braces NOW but he said he would do everything I asked as long as I convinced my father that Dr. Gonzalez didn’t need to pay him anymore. Of course, I was going to do it, our graduation is in two weeks, I want Frank braces free then.
I left Dr. Gonzalez/Rogers office, called my father and said that I wanted to talk to him, but I didn’t want it to be on the phone. I stopped by a McDonald's drive-thru because I needed to eat something, I was anxious, so I needed to eat. I ate two big macs in the parking lot and took the road to my dad’s having fries and milkshake as my fellow travelers. I was tired, it was dark, but eating was keeping me awake.
The last thing I saw were the eyes of an animal crossing the road.

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« Reply #24 on: 27. April 2020, 13:44:18 PM »
Come on... Ad-Break at best part.. continue asap ;)

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« Reply #25 on: 27. April 2020, 17:54:06 PM »
Maybe Jenny crashes and it messes up her teeth.  So, she is forced to get braces again.  This time it would be Dr Gonzalez in another disguise.  He’d put in so many appliances she couldn’t talk so she couldn’t expose him.

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Re: Story - Never Been Kissed
« Reply #26 on: 28. April 2020, 22:27:32 PM »
very nice! Thank you!

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« Reply #27 on: 29. April 2020, 02:39:09 AM »
Very nice thanks!

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« Reply #28 on: 29. April 2020, 22:20:55 PM »
Thank you for the feedback on my story.

I'm working on a part 2 but I'm not sure if I continue posting it here or in a separate post.

Please let me know

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« Reply #29 on: 29. April 2020, 23:23:22 PM »
Just keep posting in the same place. It is nice if all the parts of the story are together. If you create a second thread, it is harder to find the complete story.

I hope that you keep adding to this story, because I am enjoying what you have written so far. I have added it to TheArchive and will continue to add any other parts that you write.

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