Author Topic: Story: I really like those bunny teeth (Read 6045 times)

bracessd · « **Reply #1 on:** 12. October 2022, 18:13:23 PM »

Good start!

kelly-Marie · « **Reply #2 on:** 12. October 2022, 20:29:23 PM »

Agreed its a good start can't wait for more.

TrainTrack · « **Reply #3 on:** 12. October 2022, 23:21:43 PM »

Good start. Can’t wait for more. I like all the details you added!

CrowdedPrincess · « **Reply #4 on:** 17. October 2022, 11:07:55 AM »

kelly-Marie · « **Reply #5 on:** 17. October 2022, 14:16:59 PM »

Hi Crowdedprincess I like the story so far you've given us an idea what the characters are like and now looks like we are getting to the juicy bit keep up the good work!

bracessd · « **Reply #6 on:** 17. October 2022, 19:33:01 PM »

Keep up the good work @crowdedprincess

CrowdedPrincess · « **Reply #7 on:** 18. December 2022, 11:23:31 AM »

Braceface2015 · « **Reply #8 on:** 18. December 2022, 19:59:35 PM »

I don't think there is one specific thing I enjoy over another. The whole story is interesting. It is well-written and has a nice flow to it. I do like that you are doing your research to provide us with a believable story.

TrainTrack · « **Reply #9 on:** 19. December 2022, 05:10:18 AM »

I really like the effort it looks that you have put into writing this chapter. It has lots of detail and it seems like those treatments could happen in real life, not like the wired in headgear and ten fixed appliances that shows up in other stories.

radian · « **Reply #10 on:** 19. December 2022, 14:33:40 PM »

I really like the start of this story, which is kind of realistic. I Can't wait to read more of it !

bracessd · « **Reply #11 on:** 19. December 2022, 18:05:58 PM »

I like where her treatment is heading!

anton08 · « **Reply #12 on:** 19. December 2022, 18:15:36 PM »

It is a nice story indeed.

My only question are spacers, which may be required for the crowding, that does not give a lot of space for the braces and, maybe, bands.

So we wait and see.

Braces1234 · « **Reply #13 on:** 22. December 2022, 11:42:37 AM »

Really good story so far, keep up the great work

CrowdedPrincess · « **Reply #14 on:** 27. December 2022, 02:21:13 AM »

Quote from: anton08 on 19. December 2022, 18:15:36 PM

It is a nice story indeed.

My only question are spacers, which may be required for the crowding, that does not give a lot of space for the braces and, maybe, bands.

So we wait and see.

I don't want to spoil too much but yes, she will be getting spacers. I have most of the treatment written down very meticulously in a separate document. I'm almost finished with chapter 4 so stay tuned!!!

CrowdedPrincess · « **Reply #15 on:** 27. December 2022, 11:04:34 AM »

Castlesswonder · « **Reply #16 on:** 01. January 2023, 18:50:35 PM »

Just caught up can’t wait for the next chapter

radian · « **Reply #17 on:** 03. January 2023, 15:13:16 PM »

Still great now we're approaching braces time ! I Can't wait for the next chapter and especially if there is an unpredictable thing to come in the procedure of getting on braces!

FakeorthoNL · « **Reply #18 on:** 03. January 2023, 18:14:25 PM »

Love the story! Can’t wait to see it continue:)

dr_nick · « **Reply #19 on:** 16. January 2023, 15:04:42 PM »

Yay for Athena's predicament, love it.
I feel a bit sorry for her, being the protagonist of one of our stories, that usually goes downhill fast, but I can't and won't stop following it

bsma189 · « **Reply #20 on:** 16. January 2023, 17:15:08 PM »

Looking forward to the next chapter! Great job so far

anton08 · « **Reply #21 on:** 19. January 2023, 07:58:11 AM »

There is a new year - maybe there will be a new chapter?

CrowdedPrincess · « **Reply #22 on:** 19. January 2023, 08:12:57 AM »

TimeandBrace · « **Reply #23 on:** 19. January 2023, 09:12:28 AM »

Will anyone in your story be getting headgear?~

dr_nick · « **Reply #24 on:** 19. January 2023, 10:49:45 AM »

Love it, keep it coming!

bracessd · « **Reply #25 on:** 19. January 2023, 17:38:20 PM »

Great job!

radian · « **Reply #26 on:** 19. January 2023, 18:20:04 PM »

very interesting story, now with the braces part ! keep on !

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Author Topic: Story: I really like those bunny teeth (Read 6045 times)