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Offline CrowdedPrincess

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Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« on: 12. October 2022, 03:28:50 AM »
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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #1 on: 12. October 2022, 18:13:23 PM »
Good start!
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Offline kelly-Marie

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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #2 on: 12. October 2022, 20:29:23 PM »
Agreed its a good start can't wait for more.
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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #3 on: 12. October 2022, 23:21:43 PM »
Good start. Can’t wait for more. I like all the details you added!
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Offline CrowdedPrincess

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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #4 on: 17. October 2022, 11:07:55 AM »
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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #5 on: 17. October 2022, 14:16:59 PM »
Hi Crowdedprincess I like the story so far you've given us an idea what the characters are like and now looks like we are getting to the juicy bit keep up the good work!
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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #6 on: 17. October 2022, 19:33:01 PM »
Keep up the good work @crowdedprincess
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Offline CrowdedPrincess

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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #7 on: 18. December 2022, 11:23:31 AM »
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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #8 on: 18. December 2022, 19:59:35 PM »
I don't think there is one specific thing I enjoy over another. The whole story is interesting. It is well-written and has a nice flow to it. I do like that you are doing your research to provide us with a believable story.

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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #9 on: 19. December 2022, 05:10:18 AM »
I really like the effort it looks that you have put into writing this chapter. It has lots of detail and it seems like those treatments could happen in real life, not like the wired in headgear and ten fixed appliances that shows up in other stories.
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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #10 on: 19. December 2022, 14:33:40 PM »
I really like the start of this story, which is kind of realistic. I Can't wait to read more of it !
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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #11 on: 19. December 2022, 18:05:58 PM »
I like where her treatment is heading!
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Offline anton08

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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #12 on: 19. December 2022, 18:15:36 PM »
It is a nice story indeed.

My only question are spacers, which may be required for the crowding, that does not give a lot of space for the braces and, maybe, bands.

So we wait and see. :)
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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #13 on: 22. December 2022, 11:42:37 AM »
Really good story so far, keep up the great work
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Offline CrowdedPrincess

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Re: Story: I really like those bunny teeth
« Reply #14 on: 27. December 2022, 02:21:13 AM »
Quote from: anton08 on 19. December 2022, 18:15:36 PM
It is a nice story indeed.

My only question are spacers, which may be required for the crowding, that does not give a lot of space for the braces and, maybe, bands.

So we wait and see. :)

I don't want to spoil too much but yes, she will be getting spacers. I have most of the treatment written down very meticulously in a separate document. I'm almost finished with chapter 4 so stay tuned!!!
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