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Offline bernal1789

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #15 on: 07. July 2020, 11:53:47 AM »
This is, to my opinon, the best history around.

Offline Jock1

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #16 on: 08. July 2020, 21:12:39 PM »
Fantastic story, the shock of having all that in your mouth! And the embarrassment.

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #17 on: 13. July 2020, 15:35:07 PM »
I haven't had any contact from the author, so I don.t know if there will any additional chapters.

If anyone would like to add more to the story, I would enjoy seeing what you come up with.

Several authors have said that if anyone would like to use their ideas or add to their stories, people are invited to do that. There are lots of old stories to choose from, so pick one and add your personal touch to it.


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Shame the authors not responding, I liked this story a lot, hopefully someone who's better at writing than me can come up with more.

Offline elio23145

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #18 on: 13. July 2020, 19:07:51 PM »
great story. wish there were more of it

Offline Tin_Grin8444

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #19 on: 29. July 2020, 09:34:45 AM »
I really like this story! It has such a strong start that builds. I'd love to see some kind of interaction with the girl mentioned throughout, and maybe some more detail on the orthodontist herself. Hopefully there are some continuations for this one.

Offline bmac26

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #20 on: 21. August 2020, 05:29:24 AM »
Great story, I hope someone continues it!

Offline bernal1789

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #21 on: 16. July 2021, 11:19:57 AM »
As I said before; this is, in my opinion, the best story around.

Offline eddiestobbart

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #22 on: 16. July 2021, 12:51:08 PM »
Thanks for bumping this thread up, bernal1789. A very good read.

Offline Boheme

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #23 on: 16. July 2021, 20:16:56 PM »
What a shame! It's a great start

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #24 on: 16. July 2021, 23:37:47 PM »
I've been in contact with the author. He can't seem to be able to get a username registered. As soon as his username is accepted, he is going to start writing more of the story.

All that is needed is for Marty or Polo to allow him to join our group of writers and we will have more to read.

Offline bernal1789

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #25 on: 06. August 2021, 21:51:18 PM »
excelent

Offline annasun251

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #26 on: 10. August 2021, 10:42:48 AM »
This story is super promising. Would love to read more!

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #27 on: 10. September 2021, 01:17:52 AM »
I've been in contact with the author. He can't seem to be able to get a username registered. As soon as his username is accepted, he is going to start writing more of the story.

All that is needed is for Marty or Polo to allow him to join our group of writers and we will have more to read.

I hope that he gets accepted soon. It took me a couple attempts to get accepted as a member of the website (and a different screen name than I first tried with) so I know that it can take time.

I do like this story. I definitely wouldn't mind having the MC interact with others from the practice, but overall I feel like the premise is interesting and I like the pacing of what's here so far. Definitely curious to find out where it's headed

Offline bernal1789

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #28 on: 12. January 2022, 06:55:42 AM »
will there be some update?

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Re: Story: Fixed Braces
« Reply #29 on: 09. July 2022, 06:24:10 AM »
This is a really great story!