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Offline LispLover

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Re: Story: Cloe's Amazing Find!
« Reply #15 on: 20. October 2021, 16:46:29 PM »
Great story! Can’t wait for more.

Offline bracessd

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Re: Story: Cloe's Amazing Find!
« Reply #16 on: 20. October 2021, 17:03:38 PM »
This will be good!

Offline Teddybear

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Re: Story: Cloe's Amazing Find!
« Reply #17 on: 18. July 2022, 23:55:00 PM »
Nice, will there be a third chapter?

Offline dominek000

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Re: Story: Cloe's Amazing Find!
« Reply #18 on: 20. July 2022, 20:59:36 PM »
Chapter two.

After school was over, I ran home as fast as I could! Luckily, I live about 10 minutes from school. My parents work late so I was home alone! I went to my room as soon as possible, opened my backpack in which I hid my find and took out the braces! I still can't understand how it's possible someone threw it out ... Or maybe someone lost it? Maybe I should return them ..

I did not think for a long time and decided to try them on! I was slowly putting them in my mouth, trying to adjust it somehow. "Click !!" I heard a soft click that echoed all over my head! The orthodontic appliance has adjusted !!! OH MY GOD!!

I immediately felt the double expanders with my tongue! My mouth was really full! I felt the herbst push my lower jaw forward. I tried to withdraw my lower jaw but the herbst immediately blocked it, what a great feeling !!! I tried to say, "GOD, THAT IS FANTASTIC" but only a strong lisp was heard from my lips. I left the braces on for the next 15 minutes and suddenly felt pain. I took them out of my mouth to let my teeth rest a little. Those 15 minutes were the most wonderful time of my life, but over and over again I was beginning to understand why someone threw them out. They were definitely not comfortable, they looked like a torture device to someone who had to wear them 24/7.
However, there was one more thing in the box! Headgear…

End of the second chapter.

Offline Braceface2015

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Re: Story: Cloe's Amazing Find!
« Reply #19 on: 20. July 2022, 21:05:40 PM »
That should be chapter 3.

Offline retained

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Re: Story: Cloe's Amazing Find!
« Reply #20 on: 21. July 2022, 01:05:54 AM »
Definitely needs more. (There seem to be two chapter 2's ??)
Im liking the first one where they get stuck in by the way.!