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Offline retained

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Re: Story: Asian Braces 2 - Back in London!
« Reply #150 on: 12. October 2021, 00:25:26 AM »
A really great story. I suppose all good things have to come to an end but the method of writing and the perfect amount of detail meant that this was the first post I headed to whenever I came to the forum.

I particularly liked the viewpoint from which it was written. I am certainly no English writing expert but I have to say that I am not keen on reading some other stories which are written in a strange sort of present tense (I am sure there is a name for it..) when people say things like 'he goes to the orthodontist and gets an impression taken" etc.
Anyway, Sparky, well done for writing in such a way that pleases so many people.

I wonder what can be next?

Ps, headgear doesnt do that much for me, its removables, getting fakes etc all the way, so lets hope for more !

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Re: Story: Asian Braces 2 - Back in London!
« Reply #151 on: 14. October 2021, 15:26:51 PM »
I think I'm storied-out as far as Danny and Amanda go, but could think of plenty of things that Jenny and the rest of her band could do.... unfortunately none of them would have any braces content....

Hey, I guess I could have Jenny in braces and headgear dancing on Strictly.... now that would be a show to watch!

But thank you all for the nice feedback!

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Re: Story: Asian Braces 2 - Back in London!
« Reply #152 on: 23. October 2021, 10:56:29 AM »
I finally got caught up on the last ten chapters.  Wow, what a whirlwind plot!  You wound up the combined 109 chapters from both series magnificently.