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Offline Elisabethperin

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story: all for love
« on: 22. June 2022, 01:11:51 AM »
Chapter 1
My name is Alicia, I'm 24 years old, I'm a natural redhead, the type with orange hair and I've been overweight since I was a child so wherever I went I always drew attention of course I always liked my hair but being fat was always difficult for me and to complete , more than 10 years ago I lost my parents in a traffic accident, they were going to a wedding party of some acquaintances and on the way back another car at high speed threw them off the track and left without providing help until today we don't know who was
 As a result I was raised by my uncles, the only living relatives I had, actually I never met them before that, we were not close reasons that I never found out, they were called Patricia and Otavio, they raised me without much affection they had no patience and a lot less time for a child. I, out of gratitude for having welcomed me, cleaned the house, helped in everything I could and the rest of the time I stayed in my room reading, and almost didn't smile but in this case it was just out of shame, shame for my crooked smile. Despite my weight being an issue, nothing like a crooked smile to torment me and stave off any chance of a date.
When I finished high school, I passed any college because it was just an excuse for me to leave home and have my freedom. Enrolled in college and soon moved, got a job at the local coffee shop
After that, it just went downhill, I had a college scholarship which I couldn't keep, but I continued in the job until one day a man in a suit walks through the door, I imagine he's here by mistake, he doesn't usually go to this type of person. who exudes power and grandeur, with dark blonde hair and the bluest eyes I've ever seen in my life, the most handsome man I've ever seen what I didn't know was that from that day on my life would change.

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Re: story: all for love
« Reply #1 on: 22. June 2022, 02:34:46 AM »
You've made a good start writing your story. I am looking forward to reading more of it.

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Re: story: all for love
« Reply #2 on: 22. June 2022, 16:24:01 PM »
Very good start.

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Re: story: all for love
« Reply #3 on: 07. July 2022, 17:31:01 PM »
Chapter 2

After that day, he came day after day, always in my section and at the same time. I ended up finding out several things about him. First, his name is Marcos, second, his order is always the same, a black coffee without sugar. He stays exactly 35 minutes and leaves.

We followed this routine for exactly 15 days. He would come at 7 am, sit at the same table, order a black coffee without sugar, stay for 35 minutes and leave. But each day he asked something different about me, with that mysterious look in his eyes. Until the Friday of a certain week, he didn't come and I confess that I was disappointed, wondering what had happened. The light he had become in my days had gone out.

I finished my shift, changed my uniform, and was ready to head home for another ice cream Netflix marathon. When I opened the door to step out across the street, propped up on his silver Aston Martin, there he was, in all his glory, and he came walking towards me.

“Janice, your co-worker, I imagine, told me you leave at this time. And I know it may seem sudden, but I couldn't wait any longer. I want to invite you out and for us to get to know each other better.”

I was shocked by this comment. After he didn't show up today, I figured he wouldn't be back, but here he is asking me for a date.

"Yes, of course, I would love to.”

That night he took me to a restaurant, beautiful, snuggling with that air of home, but with a refinement and privacy that I always preserved. He chose our plates and we sat side by side.

This became our routine for the next few months, accompanied by more intimate dinners at his apartment.

But one day it was different. He came to pick me up at my work, but he was silent, which made me apprehensive and afraid that he had changed his mind about me.

"Baby, are you all right?”

"Yeah, all right. But we need to talk after dinner.”

I decided not to answer any more. My anxiety was eating me up inside and I ended up losing my hunger.

"Alice, we met not long ago, but from the first time I saw you, I knew that you are the person I've always been waiting for. I want to make a request from the bottom of my heart. Will you marry me? But before accepting, there are things you need to know. I need control, to take care of your well-being, to have the tranquility and peace that you will always be fine. Make the decisions, but always for what's best for you my love.”

At that moment my world stopped, my breathing accelerated, but of one thing I had no doubt, how much I had started to love him and this man had become my whole life.

"I love you more than anything, and I trust my life in you. So yes, I agree to marry you in this and all other lives to come.”

That night we slept together like many others, but this time we sealed our fate together and I never spent a night out of that bed again.

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Re: story: all for love
« Reply #4 on: 07. July 2022, 18:50:41 PM »
Nice job. Looking forward to where this goes!

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« Reply #5 on: 29. August 2022, 15:47:01 PM »
Chapter 3

Marcos surprised me when he told me that one of the things he would like me to do is get braces on my teeth. I readily agreed, because I had never thought about seeing a dentist and I had never had braces, in fact, I thought it was a great opportunity to have a better smile.

“My love, I have an orthodontist cousin named Brian and I already talked to him about your case and what I would like. You just have to go to the appointment and everything will be okay. You're going to be so perfect, honey, you just have to trust me. It will be tomorrow, everything will be fixed, including your new driver who will take you wherever you need to go.”

As one of his conditions, the next day I went to the dentist with the driver, because now it would be like this, I would always be accompanied.

I arrived at the office at the time of my appointment.

The secretary, as soon as she saw me, said to me, "Doctor Medina has only your procedure scheduled for this morning. But before entering the procedure, I need you to sign a consent form, in which you agree with everything that will happen and undertake to follow the treatment indicated.”

I immediately signed without reading it as proof of my trust in Marcos, so I was soon called and entered. He was young and soon showed me where to sit. It was a common dentist's chair, but with many straps, I lay down and soon he was fastening each strap individually and very tightly, which made my eyes widen. He started at the ankles, then my thighs, abdomen and also one over my forehead.

“Good morning, Marcos has already told me that you are aware of what is going to happen and you agree with it, and you must have already signed the consent form. With everything in order, I will start the procedure, but as I was told that it would be a surprise, I will put you to sleep and when you wake up, everything will be finished.

I didn't even have time to answer, he already put a mask on my face and I soon fell asleep.

Slowly I came back to consciousness trying to remember where I was.

“Sleeping Beauty has returned to the world of the living, stay calm and don't try to speak. Not that you were going to be able to anyway.”

I was scared and tried to move, which was not possible due to the numerous straps holding me, but I saw Marcos approaching me which reassured me.

“I know it's a surprise that I'm here, but I couldn't miss such an important moment for us and our relationship. This step you took was very important and I am proud of you, now I know that we will spend our entire lives together. Now calm down and the Dr. will explain everything.”

“First I equipped you with bands complete with hooks for future adaptations, along with a complete upper expander that covers your entire upper palate equipped with extra acrylic, which will be rotated 2 times a day so that we can increase your dental arch. Marcos told me about a habit you have of biting your lips, which will be a habit that we are going to cure with a palatal grid that has spikes that won't pierce your tongue, but that if you try to move your tongue past your teeth, it will hurt. Try to move your tongue.”

The moment I tried to move my tongue, I felt like it was stuck on something, but I still tried to move it, which caused a sharp pain that I knew I would try to avoid as much as possible. What I didn't know at the time was how I was going to be able to talk with it.

“For the treatment, we put on an active lip plate that will keep your lips as far away from your teeth as possible, so you don't get in the way of the work of the braces. I put bands on all your teeth and they cover the entire length. If you look in that mirror, the only thing you can see is metal everywhere, it doesn't even look like you have white teeth.”

That moment was rock bottom for me, I didn't know how I could have a normal life.

“Now to finish, rubber bands. They go on both sides of the back teeth to the front teeth forming a cross, which will prevent you from opening your mouth too much, but the good thing is that you won't have to use them all the time, just at least 12 hours every day. Now I will leave you alone.”
He left and closed the door, and I began to cry. I had no idea what I was agreeing to. Marcos got closer to me and unfastened each strip without any hurry, and took me in his arms.

“I know this moment must be very difficult for you, but I'm very proud and you've never looked so beautiful. I'll take care of every one of your needs, you don't have to worry that pretty little head, my love. Now let's go home, it's been a very tiring day for you.”

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Re: story: all for love
« Reply #6 on: 29. August 2022, 17:23:21 PM »
Wow, sounds like a dream treatment other than the old-school full bands