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STORY: A dream ... Lucia
« on: 28. April 2022, 17:25:32 PM »
It was an evening like any other in the pub with friends. One evening in May, on the terrace overlooking the sea of ​​a club. Beautiful music, the first spring heat allowed the shirt and the women began to go out more low-cut. For some time I hadn't had a stable relationship, some adventures in search of the perfect woman to start it with.
As I drank my mojito I caught her eye. Gorgeous, about 1.75m tall with 12cm black open heel sandals, a soft slightly above-the-knee dress slightly breezy with very thin straps and a low-cut back that showed she wasn't wearing a bra. I was mesmerized by her ankles, her ass and small breasts, her smiling, casual gait. Her long brown hair in a high ponytail, green eyes ... we collided in front of the bar counter and I couldn't say a word, but I couldn't stop looking at her ... she noticed it, and smiled at me embarassed.
I immediately recognized the scent of her Narciso Rodriguez, looked at her velvety skin that already hinted at a light spring tan. I immediately searched for her smile, again, hoping to see some metallic glint on her teeth, but nothing. She wore no braces. Her smile was nice, although I noticed, as an attentive observer in love with braces, some slight imperfections. I was disappointed, but she was too beautiful ... and she especially she looked like a familiar face, she was about 30 years old and I had the feeling of knowing her.
She was with a couple of friends, also pretty, well dressed… and they too without a metallic smile. I noticed that one of them wore an invisalign, but even that couldn't beat the charm of the sexiest and sweetest woman in the club.
She spent some time drinking and laughing, the third mojito was helping to make the evening more cheerful when suddenly she passed her again, bumping her lightly in the crowd as she was taking her drink. She looked at me embarrassed, saying:
<Excuse me, I almost spilled my drink on you!>
<quiet, I told her, nothing happened, basically I was hoping she would spill her drink so I could offer you one - and I smiled, and she did too>
Before going she said to me:
<I think we know each other, I'm Lucia, and you should be Luca ... we haven't seen each other for quite some time, I finished University in Rome, I worked for a while in Milan, but I returned a few months ago hoping to do not leave again and do something here in the city. I didn't go out much because of the pandemic, but finally we can go back to life>
I was petrified, my mind began to search through the memories, and suddenly I realized that that familiar face belonged to my high school friend, whom I hadn't really seen for many years.

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Re: STORY: A dream ... Lucia
« Reply #1 on: 28. April 2022, 17:26:34 PM »
<woww - I exclaimed, almost breathless and unable to hold back the amazement - you, you are Lucia ... you have changed, definitely for the better I would say, but I could not have recognized you>
Lucia was a high school friend of mine, a simple girl, pretty, but very shy, very thin, one of those that she was never in the front row. One of those who are always a step behind without ever being noticed, with glasses and always dressed in baggy clothes, that she never gave confidences.
She smiled again, still a little embarrassed because she understood my indirect compliment perfectly well, but surely without showing the shyness of her adolescence anymore. She knew very well that she was a terribly attractive and sexy woman now, and she certainly liked that a lot.
I hugged her instinctively, wanting to break the ice immediately, seizing the opportunity, to feel her physical contact and her scent ... she reciprocated affectionately. We spent the whole evening chatting while drinking again, laughing remembering high school days, how shy and awkward she was and how she now looked like an extraordinary woman. She was intelligent and brilliant, as we talked, her irony, her sympathy, her sweetness came out of her.
Suddenly I asked her:
<what did you study? What did you graduate from? What do you do in your life? Did you come back here for work?>
<I am a dentist - said Lucia - I studied in Rome and I got a master's degree in orthodontics; I have worked in various studios between Rome and Milan as a consultant, but now that I am 32 years old I have decided that it is the right time to open my own studio, here in the city, together with my colleagues you met before>

Hearing those words was like a punch in the stomach. I was blushing and starting to feel warmer than it actually was. I felt my heart beating fast, I felt an excitement growing wildly, and I had to do everything to hide it. The most beautiful woman in the world, sexy and sweet, intelligent and nice was an orthodontist. My passion for braces has been with me since high school, I never understood why, but I had always been attracted to girls with braces ... but like a curse, I was never able to start a relationship with someone who brought the device.

<in high school I wore a huge mobile device - she said continuing to speak - it had a huge grid in front of my tongue that made me talk like a Disney duck, spit everywhere and drool, and I was too ashamed of it; but surely you never saw it because I never took it to school; my parents forced me to keep him at home all day and night, and for this reason I never went out, I didn't come to parties, I had no boyfriends; I hated it, I took it off secretly every time I could and in fact my teeth are not yet perfect ... but that appliance prompted me to study to understand how they worked ... and I became an orthodontist.>

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Re: STORY: A dream ... Lucia
« Reply #2 on: 28. April 2022, 17:48:51 PM »
CHAPTER 2
Listening to those words was really sending me into a tailspin, I couldn't stop watching and listening to Lucia. I imagined her with that huge mobile device that I had never been able to see, I wanted to ask thousands of other things about that experience but I didn't know how to do it. And I didn't want to stop talking to her. Two hours had passed, her friends approached and we changed the subject, there was clearly a feeling with Lucia, our eyes often met and when I could I tried to touch her hand, and she didn't mind. At the end of the evening we headed towards her exit, supporting her because the alcohol was starting to show its first effects.

She greeted me with a tender kiss on the cheek whispering in her ear:
<but won't you give me your phone number? Maybe we'll talk a few more days, since she'll be staying here in the city now>

We exchanged phone numbers, I kissed her back, making sure to get closer to her bare neck than to her cheek, immediately noticing her goosebumps and her happy smile.
I arrived home, happy and very excited, thinking back to that fantastic evening with Lucia. I was holding the phone in my hand, nervously, torn between sending or not sending a message. I didn't know if and what to write, but it was too important. More than an hour passed, surely Lucia would have already gone to bed, maybe she was already asleep ...
I wrote her: "goodnight charming doctor" ...
after less than 10 seconds she replied: "goodnight to you, intriguing .... I don't know what you do in life, so we'll have to meet again to tell me everything ".

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Re: STORY: A dream ... Lucia
« Reply #3 on: 28. April 2022, 18:19:52 PM »
Liking the story so far. It has a lot of potential. I wonder if Lucia will sweet talk him into getting braces? Maybe an appliance similar to what she had?

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Re: STORY: A dream ... Lucia
« Reply #4 on: 28. April 2022, 19:07:00 PM »
oh, thanks.. I have the chapter 3 ready...

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« Reply #5 on: 28. April 2022, 19:07:36 PM »
CHAPTER 3
In the following days we sent various messages, more and more frequent. Joking about this and that. We met by chance while Lucia was going to the gym, beautiful with her sporty outfit. Her top showed her perfect round breasts, her leggings showed her toned butt. Her big black sunglasses hid her green eyes like the sea, but they gave her an even more mischievous and fascinating air. We had a coffee quickly, and I launched the invitation:
<Friday night there is a nice party organized on the beach, would you like to go there together?>
<I love beach parties - she said - even if every time I have to go home with heels in hand ... yes of course, I'm glad to go with you, we'll talk in the next days for the details> And he left immediately, smiling at me and giving me a kiss on the forehead.
That Friday night I went to pick her up after dinner, it was about 11pm (she had told me she would be late between work and the gym). Lucia lived alone, she had renovated her grandparents' house, a small villa near the sea, with a lawn and an outdoor Jacuzzi. She walked up the driveway to my motorbike, she didn't expect us to ride. She wore a colorful and soft dress above the knee, wedge shoes at 14 cm fastened at the ankle, a necklace that fell between her breasts and large earrings. She wore a headband to hold her hair up, a bandeau bra that highlighted her breasts in the tight dress at the top of her. She went back to get a leather jacket, I gave her the helmet and we went to the club on the beach. I discovered that she loved big bikes and my BMW GS 1200 drove her crazy.
We spent the whole evening laughing and joking, dancing together, closer and closer, with more and more physical contact. She made fun of me because she could drink more than me because I had to ride the bike and I couldn't drink more. We had a lot of fun that evening, we got on the bike and did a tour of the city. Arriving under her house he told me:
<well, since you haven't drunk much tonight would you like to go in, have a gin and tonic and take a bath in the hot tub, given the heat?> she was clearly elated and happy, and I couldn't refuse.
I told her I didn't have a bathing suit, but she told me not to worry, my boxes would be enough.
I went in with her, holding her hand, she quickly showed me her house and where the spirits were to prepare the drinks, quickly going to the room to change into a bathing suit.
While I was preparing a drink, her gaze went to the window next to the TV ... there was that large plastic box, where mobile devices are usually kept, and I immediately went over to it. I was tempted to open it out of curiosity to see if there were any appliances in it, but that place was too strange (usually they are in the bathroom, or in the bedroom) ... I heard her approach from behind her, and she said to me:
<remember when I told you about my appliance? I know it shouldn't be there, but that's why I became a dentist and kept it. In there is my old mobile device, I haven't used it for many years, but I keep it>
She was very calm in talking about it and immediately I said to her, smiling:
<come on, show me, I'm curious to see how it fits you>
<but no, she said, I can show it to you but I haven't worn it for over 10 years, I don't think it will fit me, also because my teeth have shifted a bit>… and she took it, opening the box.
It was a very important device, a single block connected by two HERBST pistons with two labial arches above and below and a grid for the tongue. I had to pretend I didn't know him, even though he might actually have discovered that I was an expert as if I were a dentist too.
<WOW, I exclaimed… it's really weird! How does it fit in a girl's mouth? I don't believe this was your device, really…>
<of course it's my old mobile, I told you it was terrible. Look, I try to wear it to show you, but I don't know if it will fit again ... I'm excited, you're making me relive a nightmare - she said ->
She took it to the bathroom, rinsed it with water and put it in her mouth ... her mouth completely changed shape, I could see all the swellings and her lips could no longer touch. Her words were incomprehensible and suddenly a drool ran down the side of her mouth. Obviously she didn't fit perfectly in her mouth and this contributed to her exaggerated LISP and her drool.
I could not resist and instinctively I ran my hand over her lips and wiped the drool. She was a little surprised, and I immediately withdrew her hand, resisting the irrepressible urge to kiss her at that precise moment. She took it off right away, and we burst out laughing and she said to me:
<do you understand why I couldn't keep it at school? Now try it yourself, I want you to really understand it, I don't know if it will enter your mouth ... but in the end it will be like kissing me and having my taste in your mouth, right?>
Before I could answer anything, she took my mouth and skillfully (she clearly knew what to do, being an orthodontist) put that huge piece of plastic and metal in my mouth and my excitement could no longer be hidden. The taste of her, along with that of the metal and plastic, was truly fantastic. I could not move my mouth, her tongue was stuck in the metal grid, the pistons of HERBST pierced my cheeks and the drool began to come out of the sides of my mouth.
She was having fun, she was smiling and holding my hands because she didn't want me to take it off right away, she brought her lips to mine open until they touched them, she hinted a kiss and said:
<you could be a perfect patient, braces for adults are all the rage now and you may need them>
I took off the mobile device even though I would have kept it a long time, I went over and kissing her lightly on her lips I said:
<to a doctor like you I could never say no ... but if you have never had other appliances how would you explain to me how I would feel and how would the treatment be? You don't have the right experience…>
She replied:
<in fact I've been thinking about it for a while, I think it would be a great advertisement for the new orthodontic practice. It would also help me to make my smile perfect and I would like to focus on adults rather than kids for my business. I just didn't have the courage and I don't know whether to wear the traditional metal or invisalign braces ... I should ask my boyfriend, but I don't have it> ... and he laughed again.
By now I had lost all inhibitory restraints, my excitement was skyrocketing, she was beautiful in a Brazilian one-piece swimsuit and two bands covering her breasts, the taste of her in her mouth, the discussion about braces and I told her:
<well, if I were your boyfriend I would tell you to put it on right away, indeed, to try all types of braces to know what it feels like, and that you would still be beautiful ... and I would certainly choose the traditional metallic ones, they look like highly sexy piercings>
She looked at me really surprised, she couldn't understand if I was joking but my tone of voice and my gaze were really serious ... she hesitated a little, then she whispered in my ear before biting my neck:
<don't stop surprising me, Luca, this will be the reason why in high school I was in love with you but I couldn't tell you because of my braces ... I was afraid you would have made fun of me and rejected, like everyone else ... but it seems to me think you have a good idea about people who wear braces… maybe one day I'll accept your advice>… and kissed me passionately.
That night I stayed at his house, we drank a gin and tonic in the hot tub, we kissed all night and fell asleep at 6 am hugging, completely naked, with wedge shoes and heels in front of the bed and the old mobile device of Lucia on the bedside table, in its open case.

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Re: STORY: A dream ... Lucia
« Reply #6 on: 28. April 2022, 19:14:07 PM »
PS: i'm sorry for may bad english...

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« Reply #7 on: 29. April 2022, 13:40:50 PM »
CHAPTER 4
The sunlight crossed the light blue wooden shutters of the villa on the sea, I could smell the scent of the sea and the seagulls on the rocky coast. I woke up and she was already on her feet, wearing my white shirt. She was even more beautiful than I remembered her. I said "good morning" and she turned around, smiling and waved back her. She was holding her old braces in her hand and she said to me:

<Although for fun, last night was the first time anyone saw me with the device! I thought throughout my adolescence that it would be terrible, but yesterday we played it like it was normal. I have never prescribed such a device to my patients, I have always found a way to use other types of less invasive devices especially for language. And also for this reason I focused on adults, where these functional devices are almost never used, because I know what it feels like to wear them as a child. Maybe I really should try wearing braces to fully understand my patients>
I got out of bed, approached her from behind her and kissing her neck I whispered:

<you would be fine with braces on your teeth, I'm sure. And maybe you will discover that among the thousand shades of sexuality, if you overcome the taboos and patterns, you can play and be attracted to a braces as well as tattoos, piercings or your beautiful high heels>

She looked at me surprised, perhaps she had never thought about this aspect of her work, but it was clear that she was an open and confident woman, curious to discover the world without taboo.
We spent the morning at home, after a hearty breakfast, laughing together and telling each other about our lives. She told me that she traveled between Rome and Milan three days a week, to follow her patients in various practices. She told me about her studio project that she was already developing in the city and would be ready in a couple of months. And she started talking to me about orthodontic therapies for adults, the various types of braces, their functions… and I couldn't stop listening to her and looking at her in all her glory.

We went out on our motorcycles to show her my house. She was happily impressed. I had renovated an old farmhouse in the countryside, all in stone with wooden roofs, a large central courtyard and a swimming pool. I took a change while she wandered around the house to admire the structure and the large living room with the central fireplace, then we went to lunch in a restaurant on the sea and went back to my house. The day was hot and we took a dip in the pool… she undressed completely and dived inviting me to follow her. At one point, while we were mischievously joking together in the water, she said to me:

<look at my teeth, I studied my case for my thesis. The best treatment would be the use of a palate expander, a screw that attaches to the teeth to widen them, together with a fixed appliance both above and below. I should bring the molars back slightly and the best thing would be to use an extra oral traction headgear, basically an external arch with a band behind the neck to wear at night for a few months. Then a series of rubber bands. I think the treatment would last 1.5 to 2 years at the most. And then for sure some retainers to use for life to keep the teeth from moving. Do you think you could be in a relationship with a 32 year old woman with a mouth full of metal as a teenager?>

While she described that treatment to me, naked in the pool, hiding my arousal was impossible and of course she noticed. I had never told anyone about my attraction to braces, but I thought that hiding the truth from her would be a huge mistake and so I said to her:

<I could think of marrying a woman like that ... I would certainly fall in love with her, especially if she does not use the anonymous invisalign masks instead of hawley's retainers! >

She laughed and we spent the day together. We went back to her house to change and go out for dinner in the evening and have a few drinks in a pub where we met our friends. We were already a couple. It was a wonderful weekend.

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Re: STORY: A dream ... Lucia
« Reply #8 on: 29. April 2022, 15:21:02 PM »
PS: i'm sorry for may bad english...

don't worry about that, your story is quite readable.
Please do keep going.

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« Reply #9 on: 29. April 2022, 17:46:26 PM »
CHAPTER 5
The week was spent working, me in the city and she between Rome and Milan. Thursday night I heard the intercom ring and it was her, just back in town. He went into the house, I was preparing dinner (spaghetti alla tarantina, with mussels) and I had opened a bottle of white wine. I could feel her heels, black 12 cm louboutin pumps, on the terracotta floor of my house.
Before telling me anything she told me to sit in a chair and not ask any questions… she needed to do an experiment and started rummaging in her huge bag and pulled out a fingerprint kit. Before I knew it she kneaded the two blue and white balls of that material and my mouth was full of resin.
<I have to try this new material - she said - and you are my perfect guinea pig ... and next week I will be able to have a model of your mouth to understand what kind of treatment you might need>

<but I don't need the device - I muttered with my mouth full of rubber>

<they all say so> she replied, laughing

We had dinner and she spent the night at my house, she had with her the luggage of the trip just made, showing me the latest victoria secrets baby-doll that she had bought in Milan at the airport before returning.
The passion between us was unstoppable, it grew from night to night and our complicity became stronger and stronger. There was nothing I could not say, ask, discover with her. And each night was a new discovery, a new exciting adventure.

A couple of weeks passed, we planned a trip together for a weekend on an island in Sicily.
Arriving at the villa we had rented on the island, suddenly she blindfolded me and invited me to go to the bedroom. I didn't know what she had in mind, I heard noises when suddenly she opened my mouth and put something inside me. I felt the plastic, the metal, I remembered the sensation but this time it perfectly enveloped my palate and was comfortable in my mouth. I could feel the grill keeping my tongue off my front teeth. But I still heard the same noise… when I took off the blindfold, she was wearing the same appliance.

<I wanted to make two devices the same as mine I wore as a teenager, I had your fingerprints and obviously mine too - said Lucia with that unmistakable LISP due to that huge device - and I'm curious to know if it is possible to spend a night together with a man with these toys in his mouth. I want to do it now because I decided to wear the fixed brace next week, I have already talked to my colleague, but as soon as I put it on I will no longer be able to wear it>

I couldn't believe what was happening, my mind flew from the sensation of the device in my mouth to the idea of her in a week with her mouth full of metal ... and as my tongue explored my mouth, with my fingers I began to explore his, passing over every arch and every piston, approaching us and awkwardly starting to try to kiss us. It was really difficult, our tongues had to slalom to touch each other between the grids, our lips were very wet and our flavors mingled in a whirlwind of passion. The HERBST pistons banged against each other. I could feel her excitement every time she managed to do something that seemed impossible to her with the device in her mouth. Until a few minutes ago. The movement of the device inside our mouths was a sensual and passionate dance. And then playing with our devices, taking them off and putting them back on, until they swap them and laugh at us as our bodies melted in a fire of passion.

It was the best weekend of my life up to that point. We could do everything. Say it all. Try everything. A sort of competition of passion had started between us with the aim of always discovering something new, new positions, new games, new clothing, new costumes, new accessories ... we were lovers, we were accomplices, we were what we had always dreamed of.

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Re: STORY: A dream ... Lucia
« Reply #10 on: 29. April 2022, 18:04:46 PM »
Keep going. Your English is really good and I'm still really liking the story.

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« Reply #11 on: 29. April 2022, 18:18:05 PM »
I love how she made the same appliance she wore as a teenager for both of them to wear and how she surprised him. I was also surprised she's getting regular braces again. I'm wondering if he'll get regular braces and the same appliances permanently installed as well?

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« Reply #12 on: 29. April 2022, 18:49:27 PM »
CHAPTER 6

We had been together for a couple of months already. We met often even though we could only see each other on weekends and sometimes only in the evening. Lucia's new study was almost ready, she was increasingly respected among her colleagues in the other studies. We often spoke on the phone even though we both knew each other's commitments were important.
That week was a really important week. I knew that Lucia came back to town on Friday evening and I had thought of preparing dinner for her at her house, because it would be a difficult day and evening. I made a pea soup with seared red shrimp, a lime and mint marinated fish tartare and I had a bottle of excellent gin to accompany dinner. I knew that Lucia could eat something soft and that a little alcohol would certainly make her feel better. I had disconnected from work earlier and canceled all commitments until the following Monday.

That Friday she would return a little later because the fateful day had arrived: her colleague from Milan would have fitted her fixed braces. She was going to start the treatment that she herself had been planning for years and had chosen to fit it all together.

It was around 7:00 pm and I saw the gate to her house open and her new gray BMW X5 enter. She got out of the car, wearing a pair of very tight jeans, rolled over the ankle with a pair of red sandals with 12 cm heels. On top of her she wore a white top that left her flat stomach uncovered, sunglasses ... surely she was not wearing a bra and the air conditioning in the car had made it practically evident.

I went to meet her, I couldn't wait a second longer. I looked frantically at her mouth and immediately noticed her lips slightly swollen than usual, with a lipstick to match her sandals. Her expression was different from usual, I saw her tongue moving inside his closed lips and her mouth moving to move her lips away from her teeth. She smiled without showing her teeth, put her hand in front of her mouth and said to me:

<I don't know if you are ready to see all this ... it is then what I imagined and my mouth is sore>

I could hear the LISP clearly and it was super sweet. It was not as incomprehensible as with the old mobile device but surely the expander of her palate was influencing the way she spoke.

We entered the house, she threw her big bag on the sofa and approached pushing me on the chair and sitting astride my legs in front of me ... she took her hand from her mouth and smiled at me. A huge silver smile. I could see all the self-bonding metal brackets, above and below, the arch that connected them, the hooks, two red rubber bands that tied her upper and lower canines to the right and left moving smoothly while she spoke to me. She was very sweet. She was as excited as I was and she immediately asked me to explore her mouth: I began to run my index finger over her lips and as I opened her mouth I passed it over her device. She had 4 bands on her upper and 4 lower molars that hid the whites of her teeth entirely. She had the tubes for the headdress and the expander that like a spider covered her upper palate.

Immediately I placed my lips on her, my tongue on her attacks and we began to kiss without saying anything. We couldn't stop and made love immediately, on the sofa. With each moan of her her lips got stuck in the mounts of her device and her movement to release them increased my arousal. Every time she spoke I felt her lisp and my tongue played with the rubber bands. She began kissing me on the chest, on the belly, getting down and looking at me knowing that she would have to come up with something different than she was used to before her. I felt the metal of the attacks, I felt the expander but she was very good.

She went to her room to change, took a shower and went down barefoot with a shirt on. We ate the dinner I had prepared and I thank me that she couldn't have eaten anything hard. Now her mouth was starting to hurt, her gin and tonic was certainly not enough. She took a pain reliever, I walked her to the bathroom and helped her brush her teeth with the new, extra soft toothbrush. Then I put the red rubber bands back on her ...

While I was on the bed, I saw her arrive in her room holding a plastic bag in her hand. She told me:
<do you want to see the rest? I would like to try to put on my hat right away to get used to it ... I don't know if I will be able to keep it all night but I would like to start .. help me>

I got out of bed and went to meet her in front of her mirror, we inserted her face bow and she gathered her hair in the ponytail to reveal her neck and nape. I hooked the blue cervical band from one side to the other ... and she said:
<this time it won't be possible to kiss me, not even for goodnight ..>

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Re: STORY: A dream ... Lucia
« Reply #13 on: 29. April 2022, 20:02:50 PM »
Oooh....steamy, lol!

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« Reply #14 on: 30. April 2022, 04:02:09 AM »
Some of your word choices are a bit unusual, but you are doing a good job writing.

When I used Grammarly to check your spelling, There wasn't much that showed up.