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Offline Jock1

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Re: new braces story
« Reply #15 on: 26. June 2020, 15:26:07 PM »
Excellent story and I’d love to read more!

Offline bracesfanza

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Re: new braces story
« Reply #16 on: 27. June 2020, 04:15:21 AM »
Fantastic story. Thank you very much.

Offline elio23145

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Re: new braces story
« Reply #17 on: 19. July 2020, 19:22:21 PM »
thank you, cool story!

Offline Taxy

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Re: new braces story
« Reply #18 on: 08. August 2020, 18:26:45 PM »
This story is very interesting but lacks structure. There should be more paragraph breaks to help make it more readable.

Offline bmac26

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Re: new braces story
« Reply #19 on: 17. August 2020, 05:55:22 AM »
Great story!

Offline TimeandBrace

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Re: new braces story
« Reply #20 on: 30. October 2020, 09:00:18 AM »
This story is very interesting but lacks structure. There should be more paragraph breaks to help make it more readable.

Agreed, brilliant idea, but paragraph breaks would help.