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Offline kelly-Marie

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My last story
« on: 24. October 2022, 00:07:54 AM »
After this story Sandra which I'm  now writing I will not be contributing anymore stories I will confine myself to comenting on others

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Re: My last story
« Reply #1 on: 24. October 2022, 01:34:46 AM »
I'm going to miss having Kelly-Marie writing stories for us to enjoy.

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Re: My last story
« Reply #2 on: 24. October 2022, 02:31:14 AM »
Sandra

By Kelly-Marie


Chapter 1


Sandra was a hotshot lawyer. She rarely lost a case and she had quickly built up a hi-profile client list.

However, just recently she had been feeling tired and kept suffering from headaches. She was just feeling ill and this eventually prompted her to visit her doctor.

Sandra's doctor said, "Okay, Sandra, I have the results of your tests."

Sandra shifted uneasily in her seat. "Oh, please be nothing serious," she muttered under her breath.

The doctor said, "Basically, Sandra, you're exhausted. You need a rest. Tell me, do you have any holiday coming?"

Sandra said, "Yes, I'm owed about 6 weeks. I didn't take any time off last year."

"That's why you're so tired Sandra," her doctor said. He continued, "I'd like you to go here to this little island. There is a lady there who will help you. She has some unusual methods, but they work."

"When you say unusual, what do you mean?" asked Sandra.

"It's hard to describe them," her doctor said, "but trust me, you'll be back to your old self in no time."

Sandra went back to her office and explained it all to her boss. The boss agreed to pay for her flights and had his secretary organise the flights and accommodation on the remote island.

3 days later, Sandra was on a plane heading for a nearby island where, after an amazingly smooth landing, she caught a boat to the island. Once there she was taken by taxi to an address her doctor gave her. Sandra was surprised when it seemed to be a tumble-down house that looked nothing like any clinic Sandra had ever seen.

Sandra rang the doorbell and waited for someone to answer.

Chapter 2

After a few seconds she heard someone inside half singing, half humming some tune Sandra thought she recognised, then the door opened.

"Hi, you must be Sandra,” she said. “I'm doctor Richardson, pleased to meet you.”

Shaking hands with Sandra. “Come on in,” she said. Sandra followed her inside.

"So,” Doctor Richardson said. “Your doctor back home has told me all about your exhaustion and your headaches.” Sandra nodded. “But I think we can cure you. Tell me, did he tell you how I do it or my methods?”

"No, he just said some of your methods were a little unconventional.”

"Well, that's one way to put it,” said Doctor Richardson. She continued, “I use therapeutic orthodontics, and in your case a bit of orthopaedics too.”

Sandra looked a bit concerned. “I'm not sure about this,” she said.

"Well, it's up to you. I can't force you, but I'd strongly recommend it,” the doctor said.

Sandra thought for a minute. She could feel one of her headaches coming on.

"OK,” she said. “Go ahead, let's see what happens.”

Chapter 3

“Come on into the surgery, Sandra,” Dr. Richardson said.

Sandra made herself comfortable on the examination chair. The doctor said, “Okay Sandra, shall we begin?”

Sandra nodded 'yes'. The doctor cleaned Sandra's teeth, then fixed little metal brackets on them. Sandra could feel her working, but really had no idea what was going on.

Next the doctor installed an archive, then a Herbst appliance. Finally, she fitted a face-bow, which she connected to a facemask using springs.

Sandra felt relaxed. She realised that all the time the doctor had been working there was a tape playing subliminal relaxation messages.

"Almost done,” the doctor said.

"Sandra, give me your hands please.” Sandra did as she was told. The doctor put a pair of clear latex gloves on her hands.

"Sandra, you are not allowed to take these gloves off, okay?”

Sandra again nodded 'yes'. She was so drowsy now that she wasn't really with it.

Chapter 4

When Sandra was properly awake again, the doctor handed her a makeup mirror so she could see her new braces and appliances. Far from being shocked or upset, Sandra found herself actually enjoying her new look. When she had finished, the doctor said, "Sandra, I want you to go home and relax. Just do nothing, you need to wind down."

"Yes, of course doctor, I will, I promise."

"Good girl," said the doctor. "Do you remember what I said about the gloves?"

"Yes," Sandra said. "I'm not allowed to take them off."

"That's it, you got it. I'll see you back here in a week, okay?"

"Yes, I'll see you then," said Sandra.

Sandra went back to her rented apartment. She made herself some soup, which she managed to drink without too much trouble, much to her relief.

After that, she switched on the ancient TV that came with the apartment. The picture looked grainy and washed out. Sandra decided to play with her phone but quickly realised there was no Internet, at least not on her phone. She quickly realised relaxing was all she would be able to do. Soon sleep overtook her. She was dreaming some strange but pleasant dreams.

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Re: My last story
« Reply #3 on: 26. October 2022, 01:42:39 AM »
After a few seconds she heard someone inside half singing half humming some tune Sandra thought she recognised then the door opened
Hi you must be Sandra she said I'm doctor Roberts pleased to meet you
Shaking hand with Sandra come on in she said Sandra followed her inside 
So doctor Richardson said your doctor back home has told me all about your  exhaustion and your headaches  Sandra nodded but I think we can cure you  tell me did he tell you how I do it or my methods?

No he just said some of your methods were a little unconventional
Well that's one way to put it said doctor Roberts she continued I use therapeutic orthodontics and in your case a bit of orthopaedics too Sandra looked a bit concerned I'm not sure about this she said

Well it's up to you I can't force you but ide strongly recommend end it the doctor said
Sandra thought for a minute she could feel one of her headaches coming on
 OK she said go ahead let's see what happens

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Re: My last story
« Reply #4 on: 26. October 2022, 03:36:27 AM »
Chapter 2

After a few seconds she heard someone inside half singing, half humming some tune Sandra thought she recognised, then the door opened.

"Hi, you must be Sandra,” she said. “I'm doctor Richardson, pleased to meet you.”

Shaking hands with Sandra. “Come on in,” she said. Sandra followed her inside.

"So,” Doctor Richardson said. “Your doctor back home has told me all about your exhaustion and your headaches.” Sandra nodded. “But I think we can cure you. Tell me, did he tell you how I do it or my methods?”

"No, he just said some of your methods were a little unconventional.”

"Well, that's one way to put it,” said Doctor Richardson. She continued, “I use therapeutic orthodontics, and in your case a bit of orthopaedics too.”

Sandra looked a bit concerned. “I'm not sure about this,” she said.

"Well, it's up to you. I can't force you, but I'd strongly recommend it,” the doctor said.

Sandra thought for a minute. She could feel one of her headaches coming on.

"OK,” she said. “Go ahead, let's see what happens.”

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Re: My last story
« Reply #5 on: 26. October 2022, 18:03:47 PM »
This should be a fun one!

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Re: My last story
« Reply #6 on: 26. October 2022, 18:08:59 PM »
This could become really interesting  ;D

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Re: My last story
« Reply #7 on: 30. October 2022, 05:46:19 AM »
Looking forward to the rest of the story.

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Re: My last story
« Reply #8 on: 30. October 2022, 19:54:41 PM »
Hi all I've had a chat with original author of the story that  this is based on and have changed the name of the doctor at his request

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Re: My last story
« Reply #9 on: 11. November 2022, 02:19:55 AM »
Come 9n into the surgery Sandra Dr Richardson said
Sandra  made herself comfortable on the examination chair the doctor said ok Sandra shall we begin?
Sandra nodded yes the doctor cleaned Sandra's teeth then fixed little metal brackets on Sandra could feel her working but really had no idea what was going on
Next the doctor installed an archive  then a herbst appliance finally she fitted a facebow which she connected to facemask using springs
Sandra felt relaxed she realised that all the time the doctor had been working  there was a tape playing subliminal relaxation messages
Almost done the doctor said
Sandra give me your hands please Sandra did as she was told the doctor put a pair of clear latex gloves on her hands
Sandra you are not allowed to take these gloves off ok?
Sandra again nodded yes she was so drowsy now that she wasn't really with it

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Re: My last story
« Reply #10 on: 11. November 2022, 02:33:43 AM »
Chapter 3

“Come on into the surgery, Sandra,” Dr. Richardson said.

Sandra made herself comfortable on the examination chair. The doctor said, “Okay Sandra, shall we begin?”

Sandra nodded 'yes'. The doctor cleaned Sandra's teeth, then fixed little metal brackets on them. Sandra could feel her working, but really had no idea what was going on.

Next the doctor installed an archive, then a Herbst appliance. Finally, she fitted a face-bow, which she connected to a facemask using springs.

Sandra felt relaxed. She realised that all the time the doctor had been working there was a tape playing subliminal relaxation messages.

"Almost done,” the doctor said.

"Sandra, give me your hands please.” Sandra did as she was told. The doctor put a pair of clear latex gloves on her hands.

"Sandra, you are not allowed to take these gloves off, okay?”

Sandra again nodded 'yes'. She was so drowsy now that she wasn't really with it.

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Re: My last story
« Reply #11 on: 11. November 2022, 04:37:00 AM »
I have never seen gloves in a story like this before, curious to where it leads. I wonder if there is a chemical or something in them.

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Re: My last story
« Reply #12 on: 11. November 2022, 14:00:25 PM »
Hi train track you've given me an idea there il work on it a bit in my head il Write another chapter soon

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Re: My last story
« Reply #13 on: 11. November 2022, 23:21:32 PM »
I’m sure looking forward to it. This is certainly an intriguing story. I’m not sure where it is going to lead, but it will be good nonetheless. And I’m wondering what the orthopedics are. Maybe a Milwaukee brace or something similar?

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Re: My last story
« Reply #14 on: 12. November 2022, 00:38:36 AM »
It is interesting to see how different authors can use an idea in different ways. I'm definitely looking forward to more of your story.