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Offline reychar

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Emily The Experimental
« on: 14. October 2020, 22:48:24 PM »
Emily, 32, a stunning petit athletic blonde. She'd always been the cheerleader type, even as she entered her 30's she turned heads everywhere she went. She'd always had a peculiar fixation with orthodontia. As her friends during high school began, endured, and ended orthodontic treatment, she was fascinated, fixated, even at times fantasising about the various orthodontic treatments she had seen around her. One friend, Samantha, she had an Activator with Headgear when beginning her treatment, she wore the Activator at school, it affected her speech greatly. Emily secretly adored how flustered Samantha got when trying to speak, she'd subtly make Samantha the focus of attention in the group just to watch her speak, just to watch her wrestle with the seemingly gargantuan mass of plastic and metal in her mouth.

She longed to ask about it, to delve deep in to the mechanics of this incredible hardware, to dive in to the massive insecurity Samantha was feeling. At night Samantha had to wear her headgear, a fact Emily hadn't been aware of until a cheerleaders sleepover. She didn't sleep a wink that night, laid awake daydreaming of being forced to wear such devices, to have a mouth so utterly filled with intricate metalwork. To lisp her way through a day, fighting to be taken seriously. To her, to have such work done would be an honour of empowerment, sexually and socially.

Present day, Emily visits her local bar, just a short walk from her apartment. The bartender greets her, an expected sight. "The usual?"
"Yes please"

As the bartender already begins pouring her usual JD & Coke, heavy on the coke.

 "It's on me!" a suave gentleman interjects. "The name's Jack" as he holds out his hand to greet Emily. She thinks the fleeting thought as to how cliché the situation is. "Emily. Pleased to meet you" "Emily, the pleasure is all mine. What brings you here?"

"Oh, just a quick after-work drink. Just decompressing. How about you, Jack?"
"I've just bought a new office here, about to view an apartment with a view to moving here. Do you live here?"
"I do! Just down the road"
"Have you lived here long?"
"No, a couple years. The place seems nice enough"
"Perhaps you can show me around some time, Emily"
"Uh... Sure... So what business are you in? You mentioned a new office"
"I'm an orthodontist, y'know b..."
"Braces and the such?"
"Haha, yeah! That sort of thing. Perfecting a smile, not that you need any help there. Your smile is gorgeous"
"Well, heh, seeing as you mention it... I have been thinking about bra... Smile correction"
"Yeah!? You should pop by, there's this thing, Invisalign, I've had many patients have great success with it, they report it not being visible at all, their friends didn't even know they had braces!"
"Uh... Yeah... Maybe we'll talk. I don't know if invisible is what I'm looking for..."
"Uhm? Okay? Well, yeah, pop on over whenever you're able, we'll see what we can do for you"

Emily practically skipped back home, her heart racing at the anticipation of an unknown orthodontic adventure. She wondered if the orthodontist would indulge her fantasies, he seemed quite on the straight and narrow, could she play it off as a genuine orthodontic concern and not a long-held fetishistic fantasy. She longed for a mouth full of orthodontia, an upper & lower expander, a bite plate, lip bumper, perhaps starting with a removable device. She longed for the S&M experience of being gagged, but in the most socially acceptable manner. She longed for the strange glances, the pity, the frustration. To wrestle with her words whilst speaking to colleagues, friends, family. The endless drool, slurping, slurring, lisping.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #1 on: 14. October 2020, 23:07:28 PM »
Great start! I'm really excited to see where you take this story in terms of her treatment and possible relationship with this orthodontist she just met! It's also pretty well written too, which is always a plus in my book

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #2 on: 14. October 2020, 23:40:34 PM »
Thank-you Nameless, that's most kind of you. I endeavour to have a follow-up chapter shortly :)

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #3 on: 15. October 2020, 00:18:56 AM »
Emily realised she hadn't got the number for Jack's practise. He turned out to be a short Google search away. Fortuitously he was remarkably close to Emily's apartment. She phoned them the moment they opened in the morning "Good morning, I was wondering if I might get an appointment with Jack?"
"Are you an existing patient of his or not?"
She thought wistfully for a second, an existing patient, her excitement at that phrase was palpable.
"A new patient" Emily responded in a vapid, distracted manner, so taken by the impending adventure.
"Jack will be able to see you tomorrow at 1PM, is that okay?"
The knowledge that Emily had to work tomorrow and would be in the office at 1PM didn't deter her, if anything it excited her. She imagined ducking out of the office and returning with a mouth so utterly tortured, ravished, and forced upon with a mass of prescribed orthodontia.
"Uhm, yes, that's okay? Do you know how long the appointment will be? I'll need to organise it during my lunchbreak"
"20 to 30 minutes!" the assistant chirpily repiled.
Emily thought to herself, dejectedly, nothing is going to be put in place in 30 minutes. It makes it easier to organise for work, but It'll mean waiting far longer to begin a treatment. Even the thought of "beginning treatment" brought her tremendous excitement. She longed for an orthodontic treatment plan that would only feature in the nightmares of some.

As she walked to work Emily found herself gazing at the mouths of every person she passed. Eager to see some of her impending fate, braces, retainers, orthodontic appliances. She ditzily went about her day, having mentioned she'd be visiting an orthodontist during her lunch break.

Her phone alarm went off. 12:40. She snuck in to the ladies lavatory, bringing her bag with her. Tucked inside, a short black cocktail dress, she changed out of her work attire, into a slinky LBD and her most impressive pleaser heels.

She walks down the road, strutting proudly, on her way to the new orthodontists office. Gleefully she greets the receptionist, "Hi, Emily! I have an appointment with Dr Jack at 1!"
The sultry receptionist clad in light pink scrubs replies "Emily! We've been expecting you! There's no one in Jack's office now, you can head right on through! It's the 2nd door on the left" she exclaims whilst gesturing. Emily stood, staring at the stunning receptionist, the light just slightly glinting from her braces, clad with hot pink ligatures. The receptionist's jet black hair and svelte figure only served to eventuate her orthodontia. Staring for an inappropriate amount of time, she shook her head and sauntered toward Jack's office.

Her mind was swimming with the potential outcomes that lay ahead of her. How should she play it? Pretend to need genuine treatment? The fact she'd decided to wear her most promiscuous feeling outfit and had built herself up for the day with an excess of sass, her route was pretty much pre-determined. She sashays in to Jack's office, confidently greeting him "Hi Jack! So good to see you!" She launches in to a hug before casually sitting herself in the examination chair.

"Emily. Hi... Good to see you" he says whilst putting on gloves and preparing a lip spreader. "So, Emily, I'd like to examine your mouth, take some x-rays, and some impressions. As I was saying the other day, I think you're an ideal candidate for Invisalign, just to correct some positioning of your teeth, otherwise your smile looks great! We should be able to get that sor..."
"Jack... I've been looking in to orthodontic treatments, don't you think I'd be better off with an Activator? Or a Van-Beek Appliance, or a Twin-Blo..."
"Uh? Those are all very serious treatments? I don't think your case warrants anything like that! Are you nervous, sometimes Googling symptoms can sound pretty bad!"
"No... Jack..." she seductively licks her lips and begins caressing his lapel.
"Jack, I don't think you understand. I need serious treatment. I need the scary... sexy... orthodontist to force me in to serious treatment... Do you understand, Jack? Have I made myself.... Clear?"
"I... Uh... We'll take some impressions now, and I'll see what I can do. I think I understand. I've been writing a paper regarding a novel orthodontic treatment. If I'm understanding you correctly, you might be the perfect candidate. I warn you, it may be gruelling and the rules will be strict"
"Jack, strict sounds incredible..." So taken by emotion, excitement, and lewd thoughts she let her mouth take the lead "Doctor.... Would it be wrong of me to invite you to another drink tonight, to repay your kindness?"
"Uhm... Well, that sounds inappropriate, however nothing about this appointment sounds appropriate! I suppose it'd be rude not to! I'd love to get to know more about you..."
"Mmm... Yeah... Me too" Emily wistfully uttered whilst distracted by the thought of her fantasies being realised. She giddily stares off in to space eagerly anticipating her meeting colleagues, clients, friends with a face full of some as-yet unknown orthodontic appliances.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #4 on: 15. October 2020, 01:09:01 AM »
Great start, looking forward to more chapters.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #5 on: 15. October 2020, 03:00:46 AM »
Great so far, I’m very interested to see where it goes!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #6 on: 15. October 2020, 06:11:52 AM »
Great story!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #7 on: 15. October 2020, 11:17:54 AM »
Great start!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #8 on: 15. October 2020, 11:46:29 AM »
It's great to see so many people commenting on a new story. I want to add my agreement. I think it is a good start to what is looking like a very interesting story.

I always ask for permission from a new writer before adding their stories to TheArchive. so I would like to know if I have your permission to add this story and any others that you write to my collection and share them with other people.


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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #9 on: 15. October 2020, 12:24:21 PM »
Love this story already.

Sometimes I feel the same way. Can't wait to see what's in for her.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #10 on: 15. October 2020, 12:28:47 PM »
This is an awesome story  ;D hope Emily will become the treatment she wants... and many of the members want as well...i think  >:D

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #11 on: 15. October 2020, 15:13:03 PM »
Great 2nd chapter! Really looking forward to the next one, whether you just focus on their relationship or drive in with her treatment as well. Either option, or something I dont expect for that matter, would be wonderful for the next chapter

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #12 on: 15. October 2020, 17:37:01 PM »
Awesome story so far! Can't wait for more

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #13 on: 15. October 2020, 17:45:51 PM »
awesome keep it up

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #14 on: 15. October 2020, 21:46:47 PM »
Great story! Keep it up.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #15 on: 15. October 2020, 22:06:56 PM »
interesting, and very intense!
Just try not to kill off any characters, they don't like that here! (those who know, know what I mean ;) )

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #16 on: 16. October 2020, 11:01:41 AM »
interesting, and very intense!
Just try not to kill off any characters, they don't like that here! (those who know, know what I mean ;) )

Once I'd did a story, with several possible endings, one of which killed off the character.... wasn't  a popular ending! Then there was the murder mystery.... not popular

Maybe I need to have another go, and annoy a few people!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #17 on: 16. October 2020, 15:04:26 PM »
Totally agree this is great so far I too really hope Emily gets what she wants and more besides and maybe the sexy receptionist too

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #18 on: 16. October 2020, 21:06:55 PM »
Once I'd did a story, with several possible endings, one of which killed off the character.... wasn't  a popular ending! Then there was the murder mystery.... not popular

Maybe I need to have another go, and annoy a few people!

I'm pretty curious how you would write a braces story with the death of a character being directly related to their braces. Obviously someone wearing braces could die in a car crash, but it's much harder to imagine the braces being the cause of it.

The first idea that popped into my head was involved a horrible accident in the removal process, but I really dont want to think about it further than I already have, even if it's pretty fitting for Halloween.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #19 on: 17. October 2020, 07:03:14 AM »
I like where this story is going! I hope the receptionist comes into play...

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #20 on: 18. October 2020, 05:37:08 AM »
Love this so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #21 on: 19. October 2020, 16:29:08 PM »
@Braceface2015, it would be my honour if you were to add this story! I've been lurking here for many years, I've always wanted to ask, could you give me a link to your archive.

I've another chapter on it's way very shortly! I can't thank you all enough for your support, it's incredible! Thank-you!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #22 on: 19. October 2020, 16:54:31 PM »
CHAPTER 3: THE BAR.

Emily meets Jack at the bar, the same cocktail dress, tights, heels, just with a slightly more daring look in terms of makeup.

She walks in to the bar seeing Jack already propped against the bar casually sipping a pint, clearly trying not to make it clear he's noticed Emily in a big way.

"Jack! You came!"
"Emily, I couldn't imagine standing..." his eyes darted from her feet to her eyes "you up!"
"Oh, you're too sweet!"
"Can I get you a drink?"
Emily glances at the bartender and receives a knowing glance in return.
"JD & Coke, Emily?" the bartender interjects.
"You're a regular here?" asks Jack.
"Oh... Uh... Not too regular" she responds.
"Only every night for the last 2 years, eh!" the bartender offers.
Emily glares at the bartender in a sultry, seductive, yet ultimately annoyed manner.
"Haha! We all need to enjoy ourselves, it's self care!" Jack says, keen to break the growing tension.
"So... Jack, how did you become an orthodontist? Was it something you wanted to do?"
"Well, uh, no I always thought I'd be a doctor, but there's... Well... Honestly, there's easier money in orthodontics"
"Mmhmm, I bet..." Emily wistfully uttered, her mind now entirely imagining the handsome Dr Jack mounting her in a dental chair, forcing her mouth apart with dental spreaders, and taunting her with scary treatment plans as he penetrates her.
"...and so that's how I got my first practise"
"Huh!?" Emily blabbers, having given away the fact she was daydreaming throughout the entire time he'd been talking.
"Emily, tell me, what made you want orthodontic treatment? Your smile is just... Amazing. Enchanting even"
Emily blushed briefly, the combination of Jack's incredible looks, his bubbly personality, her lust for an orthodontic adventure, and the JD & Coke had her flustered.
"Jack..." she edged towards him, grabbing the lapel of his blazer, his eyes met hers, they lean in and kiss.
"Jack..." she utters again, inches from his face, she leans in to his right ear.
"Jack, could you love me with braces? A mouth full of metal..." "What about an ek-thpander?" she lisped seductively. "Jack, do you think you could handle a braceface?"
Emily felt Jacks heart pound. She grabs his thigh, raising her hand toward his crotch, she felt his erection, leaning in closer, their hips together "Jack? Do you like the thought of me in braces? The thought of my petit body, helpless in your chair? Do you like the thought of being able to do whatever you want to me? Won't the poor cheerleader be mortified to have a catastrophic amount of metal in her mouth?" she whispered.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #23 on: 19. October 2020, 17:50:22 PM »
What a cliffhanger! I'm excited for his response and her treatment to start!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #24 on: 19. October 2020, 18:15:46 PM »
what a story... awesome  ;D can´t wait which treatment Jack will choose for Emily

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #25 on: 19. October 2020, 18:55:04 PM »
Awesome story!!!!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #26 on: 19. October 2020, 21:00:21 PM »
Great story can't wait for the next chapter

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #27 on: 19. October 2020, 21:52:50 PM »
In the story, Jack can question if what he is doing is, well, in the end he will agree but it will start in a very passive way, while Emily will demand that he fill it with metal and plastic to the point that he can not even drink with a straw . it's just a suggestion.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #28 on: 20. October 2020, 13:32:47 PM »
I like where this story is going but watch you don't go too NSFW/inappropriate as I'd hate to see this removed.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #29 on: 20. October 2020, 14:03:33 PM »
https://www.bracesforum.net/general/forum-rules/msg34239/#msg34239

Please check out these guidelines for stories as well as the general guidelines for postings to this site. I don't want you to have this story deleted or get into trouble for posting inappropriate content. I am enjoying the story so far and it looks very promising.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #30 on: 21. October 2020, 20:00:42 PM »
Very well writen. Way to go!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #31 on: 21. October 2020, 22:31:56 PM »
Please go on with this awesome Story. Can't wait what treatment Emily will get

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #32 on: 24. October 2020, 23:42:49 PM »
amazing story! keep going

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #33 on: 30. October 2020, 08:57:58 AM »
A older woman who was a Cheerleader in braces as well as all sorts of other kinds of appliances? Perfection.  :)

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #34 on: 09. November 2020, 16:15:56 PM »
I really hope you continue this story.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #35 on: 19. November 2020, 21:04:57 PM »
I wonder why he'd stopped writing the story. Perhaps he had things in mind that weren't according the rules or he simple had no motivation left to continue.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #36 on: 19. November 2020, 23:38:20 PM »
It seems like giving up on a story isn't uncommon when the author is new to the forum.  Seems from previous posts that he wanted access to the story archive.  Maybe he just gave up due to loss of interest.  Maybe he found it a daunting to get to 30 posts.  With the time it takes to write a story, I can easily understand that.