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Offline ortho218

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #15 on: 15. October 2020, 22:06:56 PM »
interesting, and very intense!
Just try not to kill off any characters, they don't like that here! (those who know, know what I mean ;) )

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #16 on: 16. October 2020, 11:01:41 AM »
interesting, and very intense!
Just try not to kill off any characters, they don't like that here! (those who know, know what I mean ;) )

Once I'd did a story, with several possible endings, one of which killed off the character.... wasn't  a popular ending! Then there was the murder mystery.... not popular

Maybe I need to have another go, and annoy a few people!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #17 on: 16. October 2020, 15:04:26 PM »
Totally agree this is great so far I too really hope Emily gets what she wants and more besides and maybe the sexy receptionist too

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #18 on: 16. October 2020, 21:06:55 PM »
Once I'd did a story, with several possible endings, one of which killed off the character.... wasn't  a popular ending! Then there was the murder mystery.... not popular

Maybe I need to have another go, and annoy a few people!

I'm pretty curious how you would write a braces story with the death of a character being directly related to their braces. Obviously someone wearing braces could die in a car crash, but it's much harder to imagine the braces being the cause of it.

The first idea that popped into my head was involved a horrible accident in the removal process, but I really dont want to think about it further than I already have, even if it's pretty fitting for Halloween.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #19 on: 17. October 2020, 07:03:14 AM »
I like where this story is going! I hope the receptionist comes into play...

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #20 on: 18. October 2020, 05:37:08 AM »
Love this so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #21 on: 19. October 2020, 16:29:08 PM »
@Braceface2015, it would be my honour if you were to add this story! I've been lurking here for many years, I've always wanted to ask, could you give me a link to your archive.

I've another chapter on it's way very shortly! I can't thank you all enough for your support, it's incredible! Thank-you!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #22 on: 19. October 2020, 16:54:31 PM »
CHAPTER 3: THE BAR.

Emily meets Jack at the bar, the same cocktail dress, tights, heels, just with a slightly more daring look in terms of makeup.

She walks in to the bar seeing Jack already propped against the bar casually sipping a pint, clearly trying not to make it clear he's noticed Emily in a big way.

"Jack! You came!"
"Emily, I couldn't imagine standing..." his eyes darted from her feet to her eyes "you up!"
"Oh, you're too sweet!"
"Can I get you a drink?"
Emily glances at the bartender and receives a knowing glance in return.
"JD & Coke, Emily?" the bartender interjects.
"You're a regular here?" asks Jack.
"Oh... Uh... Not too regular" she responds.
"Only every night for the last 2 years, eh!" the bartender offers.
Emily glares at the bartender in a sultry, seductive, yet ultimately annoyed manner.
"Haha! We all need to enjoy ourselves, it's self care!" Jack says, keen to break the growing tension.
"So... Jack, how did you become an orthodontist? Was it something you wanted to do?"
"Well, uh, no I always thought I'd be a doctor, but there's... Well... Honestly, there's easier money in orthodontics"
"Mmhmm, I bet..." Emily wistfully uttered, her mind now entirely imagining the handsome Dr Jack mounting her in a dental chair, forcing her mouth apart with dental spreaders, and taunting her with scary treatment plans as he penetrates her.
"...and so that's how I got my first practise"
"Huh!?" Emily blabbers, having given away the fact she was daydreaming throughout the entire time he'd been talking.
"Emily, tell me, what made you want orthodontic treatment? Your smile is just... Amazing. Enchanting even"
Emily blushed briefly, the combination of Jack's incredible looks, his bubbly personality, her lust for an orthodontic adventure, and the JD & Coke had her flustered.
"Jack..." she edged towards him, grabbing the lapel of his blazer, his eyes met hers, they lean in and kiss.
"Jack..." she utters again, inches from his face, she leans in to his right ear.
"Jack, could you love me with braces? A mouth full of metal..." "What about an ek-thpander?" she lisped seductively. "Jack, do you think you could handle a braceface?"
Emily felt Jacks heart pound. She grabs his thigh, raising her hand toward his crotch, she felt his erection, leaning in closer, their hips together "Jack? Do you like the thought of me in braces? The thought of my petit body, helpless in your chair? Do you like the thought of being able to do whatever you want to me? Won't the poor cheerleader be mortified to have a catastrophic amount of metal in her mouth?" she whispered.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #23 on: 19. October 2020, 17:50:22 PM »
What a cliffhanger! I'm excited for his response and her treatment to start!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #24 on: 19. October 2020, 18:15:46 PM »
what a story... awesome  ;D can´t wait which treatment Jack will choose for Emily

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #25 on: 19. October 2020, 18:55:04 PM »
Awesome story!!!!

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #26 on: 19. October 2020, 21:00:21 PM »
Great story can't wait for the next chapter

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #27 on: 19. October 2020, 21:52:50 PM »
In the story, Jack can question if what he is doing is, well, in the end he will agree but it will start in a very passive way, while Emily will demand that he fill it with metal and plastic to the point that he can not even drink with a straw . it's just a suggestion.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #28 on: 20. October 2020, 13:32:47 PM »
I like where this story is going but watch you don't go too NSFW/inappropriate as I'd hate to see this removed.

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Re: Emily The Experimental
« Reply #29 on: 20. October 2020, 14:03:33 PM »
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Please check out these guidelines for stories as well as the general guidelines for postings to this site. I don't want you to have this story deleted or get into trouble for posting inappropriate content. I am enjoying the story so far and it looks very promising.

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