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Offline lithiumd21

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Back In Braces
« on: 23. October 2020, 07:29:12 AM »
Hello all,

I would like to gain access to the story section, and figured writing my own story would be a good start.  Here goes:

"Back In Braces"

Chapter 1

Erin was a 20 year old student just starting her sophomore year of college. Around 5’ 3”, with plump lips, blue-green eyes and curly brown hair, she was looking forward to the new semester.  She had just moved in with her friends from freshman year into a 4 person apartment and couldn’t wait to pick up with the frat parties and bar hopping she had become accustomed to the previous year.

Except this year would be even better.  Her long term boyfriend, Daniel, had graduated high school and was starting out as a freshman at her school.  On academic scholarship, she knew Daniel could attend any college or university that he wanted, and it made her feel good to know that he choose to come and be with her.  The past year in a long distance relationship with Daniel hadn’t been easy, with him having a few moments of “indiscretion”, but they had worked through it. She still felt that he loved her.  Besides, just thinking about Daniel with his muscular chest and 6 pack abs made Erin a bit hot.  She was a little concerned about the new competition with all the new college woman Daniel would meet, but she knew that with their chemistry that they had more than a good chance of remaining together.
 
Erin stepped out of the shower and slipped into her underwear and bra.   She took a look at her body, twisting to take a look at her backside.  Erin had always been on the curvy side, but she had dieted all summer to get down to 135 pounds and looked as good as she ever had.  She knew Daniel was attracted to her build, and she felt good about how she stacked up compared to the other women on campus.

Erin threw on some black leggings and a tight white, low cut blouse with sequin detailing.  She had bought it at the mall earlier in the day.  At $50, she really couldn’t afford to spend that much on a shirt, but she wanted to look perfect for Daniel on her their first night out together at school.  She leaned in towards the mirror to apply some gloss to her sultry lips.  She made a big smile to reveal her teeth.

“Jeez,” Erin thought, “What the hell?”

When she got her braces off in high school a couple years ago, she had the smile of a magazine model.  Now, her once straight row of front bottom teeth were a mess, overlapping each other.  Her top teeth were much better, but when she looked closely it seemed as though the front two had moved farther apart, with an almost noticeable gap between them. Had they really gotten that bad? Erin had been given Invisalign type retainers after getting her brackets off, and she wore them diligently for the rest of high school. But since going to college, with the late night parties and friends constantly present, she had neglected to wear them.
 
“It’s only been a year,” she thought.  “I’m sure they still fit.”

Erin stepped out of the bathroom, went to her dresser and fished out her orange retainer case with a bright white smile printed on it. She popped it open and went back into the bathroom.

She tried the top retainer first. She tried to force it on her teeth, with the molars seemingly going on OK.  But when she got to the front, it was almost as though her front teeth had shifted forward, and the retainer wouldn’t slip over them.  Disappointed, she tried the bottom retainer even though she already knew the result: not even close.

“Erin! What the hell are you doing in there.” A shout came from the living room. “Come on girl, we need to start pregaming.”

“Coming!” Erin shouted.  She tossed the worthless retainers in the waste basket and forgot all about her teeth, ready to start the night.

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Re: Back In Braces
« Reply #1 on: 24. October 2020, 01:32:02 AM »
excited for erin's first trip to the ortho..

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Re: Back In Braces
« Reply #2 on: 24. October 2020, 04:06:10 AM »
Great start. I hope Daniel have teeth problems too!  :D

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Re: Back In Braces
« Reply #3 on: 24. October 2020, 04:35:33 AM »
Great start! Looking forward to where this leads.

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Re: Back In Braces
« Reply #4 on: 30. October 2020, 06:14:19 AM »
There's a reason it's called a retainer.

Hehehe, well, Erin will learn in due time, i'd say.

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Re: Back In Braces
« Reply #5 on: 30. October 2020, 22:03:50 PM »
interesting Start of this story... Looking forward what will happens in her new treatment

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Re: Back In Braces
« Reply #6 on: 08. November 2020, 19:51:58 PM »
Very well writen. Looking forward for following chapters to come.

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Re: Back In Braces
« Reply #7 on: 09. November 2020, 06:05:05 AM »
Chapter 2

“Erin, another glass before we head out?” asked Emily, her good friend from freshman year and now her roommate.  The suite they lived in had a common room and two bedrooms, with two girls to each.

“No thanks I’m good for now. First night back I don’t want to go too hard yet.” 

Erin was feeling a bit tipsy already and figured she’d better take it easy.  It was only 9 pm! Her friends could really throw ‘em back.

“I was waiting for Dan to get over here first and we could all go together.”

“Why don’t you just text him and tell him to meet us there?”

“I have been,” said Erin, annoyed.  “I sent him like 5 texts in the last hour, and I called him but no answer.”

“You should just go get him then,” said Emily.  Dan’s dorm was only a couple minutes’ walk away.  Erin thought about it.  She had wanted to go out together but figured she might as well go pick him up. 

“Yeah, alright.  I need to go check up on him anyways,” she said jokingly.

“The place we are going is 28 Church Street,” said her other roommate Denise.  “We were there once last year.  I think you were there for that.”

“Yeah, I remember.  Alright I’m gonna head over.  I’ll see you guys in a bit.”

Erin grabbed her purse and headed out into the cool night air.  It was great being back.  Their college was somewhat out in the middle of nowhere, so there was nothing else to do on the weekend except go out and party. She had been to Dan’s dorm earlier in the day to help him move in. His roommate, Scott, seemed like a cute kid. Daniel and him had a lot in common – played football in high school, liked to go to the gym, both easy going with good sense of humor.  She hoped they’d be a good match.
She’d actually lived in Dan’s dorm the year before.  It was coed, with guys and gals on the same floor but separated into sections.  She knew what went with that, and had met her fair share of guys as a freshman that she thought could have turned into something romantic. 

Erin walked in and turned down the hallway on the way to Dan’s dorm room.  When she turned the corner she could see a group of 5 or 6 freshman hanging out outside their room, one of them Dan.  He seemed to be laughing with a tall, skinny blonde girl in light wash jeans with a white tank.  That wasn’t really his type though, she thought, since Dan usually had a thing for girls on the “curvier” side, like Erin.

“Hey Er!” Dan shouted down the hallway.

Oh man, Erin thought. She could tell just from his tone that Dan had already had few and was buzzed.
“Hey babe, having fun I can tell!” She gave Dan a big hug and planted a kiss on his cheek. 

"I might as well mark my territory," she thought to herself jokingly.

“Oh we just had a few brews.  Ready to get going to this party.  You sure it’s cool if we come?”

“Yeah of course, just your standard house party. 5 bucks to get in.” said Erin.

“OK great,” Dan said with a smile.  She thought looked so sexy, as usual.  Tonight he was wearing a light blue short sleeve polo shirt that showed off his toned arms. 

“You’ve got to introduce me to your friends first,” said Erin cheerfully.

“Of course.  Well you know Scott already. This is Miles and Mark; they live next door.  And this is Katie and Megan, their room is around the corner.”

“Nice to meet you all.  I’m Erin, Dan’s boyfriend.”   Erin shook hands with each.

“Good to meet you too!” said the leggy blonde Katie.  Erin noticed a glint of metal as Katie spoke, and thought her lips seemed to be a bit puffed out.

“We love it here so far.  Thanks for the tip on the party.  Hopefully you can show us the ropes,” Katie said to Erin with a laugh.   When she laughed, Erin could see she had a mouth full of braces, the old school metal kind. And also a hint of what looked to be rubber bands, possibly?  The white things stretched from the canines in her upper jaw back into the bottom back of her mouth.

“Oh man!,” Erin thought to herself, “I guess I don’t have anything to worry about with this one.”  A full brace face in college?  She seemed like a nice girl, and Erin felt sympatheric for her.  It would be tough getting guys with those things.

“OK let’s do this – you guys ready?” said Dan.  The others agreed, and they headed out…

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Re: Back In Braces
« Reply #8 on: 14. November 2020, 05:57:10 AM »
Please continue!! This is so good

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Re: Back In Braces
« Reply #9 on: 17. November 2020, 01:00:10 AM »
I second that.  Please continue  ;)

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Re: Back In Braces
« Reply #10 on: 19. November 2020, 02:48:41 AM »
Please continue this, I’m excited to see how a non compliant, vain girl will cope with any future orthodontic work

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Re: Back In Braces
« Reply #11 on: 22. November 2020, 07:20:20 AM »
Later that night, Erin and Dan ended up back at Dan’s dorm room, both a bit tipsy.  Scott, Dan’s roommate, said he wouldn’t be back that night.  After walking back to the dorms in mostly silence, Erin sat at the edge of Dan’s bed, flipping through Facebook but not really paying attention.

 “Something wrong?” said Dan. 

“It seemed like you enjoyed the party,” Erin said in an annoyed tone, ignoring his question.

“Yeah it was good.  A bit crowded though.  Come on, get off your phone.”

“You spent a lot of time talking to that girl, Katie. I feel like I barely saw you the whole time.” Erin ventured.

“What do you mean? We were just talking.  We’re in some of the same classes.  What are you worried or something?” Dan said teasingly.

“Of her, God no,” said Erin.  “Why would I be worried about that brace face?”

“Oh come on they’re not so bad,” said Dan.

“Not so bad?  She looks ridiculous! She must be the only person on campus with braces.”

“That’s probably not true,” said Dan. He paused for a second.  “Besides, I’ve always thought braces on a woman are attractive.”

“What?! You must be joking.  What are you some sort of weirdo?”  Erin was both annoyed and borderline shocked.

“Not at all,” said Dan.  “Just something about them I guess.”

“You’ve never mentioned this before.” She didn’t know what to say.
 
“It never came up.” Dan sat up.  “You used to have braces, right?”

 “Yeah, a long time ago...  This is so weird.  So you’re saying I actually do need to be worried about the brace face?” Erin said.   

“No, no, of course not. Just forget I said anything.”

“Fine…”  Erin slowly ran her tongue across her top teeth, feeling the almost imperceptible gap between them. She thought about her retainers that no longer fit…

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Re: Back In Braces
« Reply #12 on: 22. November 2020, 15:22:52 PM »
Nice bit of foreshadowing at the end ;D

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Re: Back In Braces
« Reply #13 on: 18. December 2020, 02:04:14 AM »
Can't I wait to read more