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Offline ineedbraces25

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Anyone into this story idea?
« on: 02. March 2023, 21:26:52 PM »
Would anyone be into a story where this 24 year old woman agrees to let her dommes (two very hot lesbian women around her age) give her a makeover and have total control for a day.  They’re both very into braces on women and take her to an ortho (that unbeknownst to her does same day installations) and it goes from there. It’s a pretty hot story imo.

I‘be written a fair amount of it just need to tweak, but not sure if it fits guidelines because of the dom/sub dynamic. There’s flirting, a kiss, nothing explicit though. Also because my main character is like mortified and does not want braces (though she did consent to having anything done), it could be read as somewhat not consensual? It’s a situation where she secretly wants braces and always has but is conflicted and embarrassed so outwardly is like no way!! Which i relate to a lot haha.

Thoughts?

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Re: Anyone into this story idea?
« Reply #1 on: 02. March 2023, 22:15:11 PM »
I can give it a quick read if you like. If there is no sex and they are all adults, the nonconsent part of it shouldn't be much of a problem.

If you don't feel it will fit in here, I would still like to have it for TheArchive.



Offline TimeandBrace

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Re: Anyone into this story idea?
« Reply #2 on: 03. March 2023, 00:15:27 AM »
It sounds like a fantastic story idea. Would wired in headgear be involved?~~

Offline greenboy

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Re: Anyone into this story idea?
« Reply #3 on: 03. March 2023, 02:10:00 AM »
I'd be interested in reading this.  Sounds very good.

Offline ineedbraces25

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Re: Anyone into this story idea?
« Reply #4 on: 03. March 2023, 03:14:14 AM »
I can give it a quick read if you like. If there is no sex and they are all adults, the nonconsent part of it shouldn't be much of a problem.

If you don't feel it will fit in here, I would still like to have it for TheArchive.

Sounds good! Yes there's no sex, they're all adults and the main character did basically consent to anything happening to her (she just doesnt expect it be braces!) lol.

Offline ineedbraces25

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Re: Anyone into this story idea?
« Reply #5 on: 03. March 2023, 03:15:02 AM »
It sounds like a fantastic story idea. Would wired in headgear be involved?~~

I want it to be now. Haven't gotten to that point yet, but I may since I'm more and more into headgear/appliances lately.

Offline bracessd

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Re: Anyone into this story idea?
« Reply #6 on: 03. March 2023, 17:57:35 PM »
@ineedbraces25 It sounds like a good story! Let's see it!

Offline radian

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Re: Anyone into this story idea?
« Reply #7 on: 03. March 2023, 18:12:21 PM »
It sounds great ! To let her teeth in the hand of her doms to be controlled is a fantastic idea !

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Re: Anyone into this story idea?
« Reply #8 on: 05. March 2023, 13:52:19 PM »
I think it's a great idea for a story. I'm really curious of the outcome. Perhaps you could make two separate stories. That's what I did in the past.

A forum version and a adult version. The forum version is just missing a few parts.

Offline Braceface2015

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Re: Anyone into this story idea?
« Reply #9 on: 05. March 2023, 18:54:42 PM »
If you do an adult version, be sure to send it to me so I can put it in TheArchive.

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Re: Anyone into this story idea?
« Reply #10 on: 06. March 2023, 01:54:41 AM »
Yes. The greater the variety of stories, the better. Please go ahead.  :)