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Offline Sparky

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A story idea for someone...
« on: 14. February 2024, 16:01:54 PM »
Probably easier to write a couple of lines of story to explain it....

I was woken by a kiss from my wife or girlfriend. "Happy birthday!" she said, passing me an envelope. Opening the envelope I took out the card... but there was also a folded piece of paper, which I unfolded. It was a voucher for an 'experience'... and as I continued to read, I realised what the experience was.... clearly my wife or girlfriend accepted my love of braces, because it was for a BRACES experience....

Now, it's up to the writer what that experience could be. It could be as simple as getting some fakes on clear retainers, or it could be getting a full set of real braces.

I hope someone is inspired to write the story, as i want to read it!!!

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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #1 on: 14. February 2024, 19:13:18 PM »
I dont have any problem to start a story. I dont know what the person should do next, lol

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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #2 on: 14. February 2024, 22:57:02 PM »
I'm very interested in the story idea. I would also like to try writing. But until now I've never been the type of writer. Even at school, I often had problems writing a lot, well and with pleasure. I was always the scientific, technical, mathematical type. For these reasons, it would be more of a short story and the individual chapters would probably take longer due to time constraints, both professional and private. I actually don't like this approach because it runs the risk of not finishing the story.

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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #3 on: 14. February 2024, 23:01:39 PM »
As a non-native speaker, I have a question for other non-native speakers: when you write Stories, do you do it directly in English or do you write in your language and then translate it into English?

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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #4 on: 14. February 2024, 23:02:27 PM »
I would also like to try writing. But until now I've never been the type of writer. Even at school, I often had problems writing a lot, well and with pleasure. I was always the scientific, technical, mathematical type. For these reasons, it would be more of a short story and the individual chapters would probably take longer due to time constraints, both professional and private. I actually don't like this approach because it runs the risk of not finishing the story.
I was the same all through school. Great on all of the research papers, but terrible on any that needed creativity. About a year ago I posted a story here, which got about six chapters in before I ran out of ideas and sort of just stopped it. It was a decent experience, and I would recommend giving it a try, but I know as well as anyone that it isn’t for everyone.

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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #5 on: 15. February 2024, 00:23:33 AM »
I was the same all through school. Great on all of the research papers, but terrible on any that needed creativity. About a year ago I posted a story here, which got about six chapters in before I ran out of ideas and sort of just stopped it. It was a decent experience, and I would recommend giving it a try, but I know as well as anyone that it isn’t for everyone.

May I ask, how your story is called?

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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #6 on: 15. February 2024, 01:00:39 AM »
I didn’t expect this.

And as for the foreign language question, I would say just do what you want; I don’t think it matters that much.

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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #7 on: 15. February 2024, 01:38:07 AM »
I was the same all through school. Great on all of the research papers, but terrible on any that needed creativity. About a year ago I posted a story here, which got about six chapters in before I ran out of ideas and sort of just stopped it. It was a decent experience, and I would recommend giving it a try, but I know as well as anyone that it isn’t for everyone.

I hated English at school (that was a LONG time ago!!), and was never any good at creative writing, I was a "techie". Over the years, I've needed to write things to explaining technical things to not so technical people (I think that's called 'product documentation'! It was never really as part of my job, but in my volunteering work).

So I decided to try writing a braces story on here.

And yes, as you say, as an inexperienced writer, I would run out of ideas after a bit, plus have problems actually ending a story. Whilst a few of my stories do have a sort of ending, many have ended abruptly for one of many reasons.

If I were professionally writing a book I'd worry, but here it doesn't matter. You may have a story that only fits one or two posts, and that's fine, so do be encouraged and give it a go. The second time, you might be able to make it a little longer.

If you're worried about making the story look ok on the page (ie the formatting), then don't worry, Braceface2015 (Aka "the Archivist") seems to enjoy doing that: just write, and let him make it look pretty!


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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #8 on: 15. February 2024, 02:42:05 AM »
As a non-native speaker, I have a question for other non-native speakers: when you write Stories, do you do it directly in English or do you write in your language and then translate it into English?

I'm a native English speaker who proofreads and edits for a writer who writes in Portuguese. The translation software makes mistakes, especially when dealing with orthodontics and orthopedics and oftens gets him/her/he/she mixed up. I don't know if the software does better with other languages.

If you want someone to check over a computer translation, I'm willing to help.

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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #9 on: 15. February 2024, 08:13:46 AM »
I can think of maybe 3 stories I can honestly say I have finished and they are part of the "Braces Murder Mystery' series Sparky and I were working on. There are still a few more stories that are a part of the series I never did finish and they are still sitting in a file waiting for me to return to them. Many of my stories have been taken to a point where I can say "To be Continued" rather than "The End."

Some of my stories are simply sitting in storage, waiting to be worked on again.


As Sparky said, don't worry about creating a perfect story. Put your thoughts into a readable form and show us what you have to offer. I have been accused of being a grammar Nazi and I am fine with it. I suggest using an app or online writing program to work on your story before posting it. I use Google Docs, Grammarly and Open Office and rely heavily on the spellchecker to catch spelling mistakes.

Some of the writers here are non-native English speakers or have a less-than-perfect understanding of the English language. There is nothing wrong with being that way. If you need help making your story look good or just want someone to proofread your story, ask us for assistance.

Before I add any story to TheArchive, I run it through an editing process involving reading and correcting what I feel are errors. Very seldom do I point out errors I find unless it is something that is affecting a story or is something that the writer should be correcting. Every writer has small things that occur when they are writing and just get missed before they post the story. I reread my stories at least twice before I post them and still miss things.

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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #10 on: 16. February 2024, 19:18:04 PM »
I write storys from time to time I have one I must get round to finishing soon, I don't know how to use spell checker or anything like that I only have a tablet computer so maybe it's not possible with one of those. I know my grammar and spelling are not up to scratch but then I never went to school spent my time in the pub or snoozing by the river

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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #11 on: 16. February 2024, 22:54:43 PM »
Kelly-Marie, you just keep writing, I'll take care of editing the stories for you. The stories you write are interesting and it would be a shame to miss them if you stopped writing them.

You can add Grammarly to your tablet as an app and it will help you to write your stories by suggesting what needs to be changed.

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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #12 on: 17. February 2024, 19:11:38 PM »
Thanks Braceface il try to write more of my Zara story soon  been rather busy lately things are settling down now tho thankgoodness

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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #13 on: 03. March 2024, 09:09:01 AM »
I have finally written a story from Sparky's suggestion.  He never mentioned the often 2500 word limit so I went longer.  I put it in the stories section and some will probably find that strange or annoying.  It's story 78 in a thread I put a lot of my stories in.  I have a personal goal of making that thread reach 100 stories.  I also prefer posting there because google never reaches into it when finding search results.

The story is here:  https://www.bracesforum.net/braces-stories-braces-special-(english)/scenes-in-an-exhibition-of-the-decoration-of-the-mouth/msg147281/#msg147281

If you have not looked into that thread, you might want to look at the first post, where there is a table of contents.

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Re: A story idea for someone...
« Reply #14 on: 03. March 2024, 16:24:49 PM »
I only added in the word limit for the "writers challenges", to make it more fun. This was just an idea I came up with, that I hoped someone might be able to use.

And you did, so thank you for your excellent story!